Aaagghhh Kevin Lynch. Never liked the guy and yr story, making him the perp doesn't seem out of character somehow. Love the tender way DM deals with PG both b4 and after the incident. Great story, told with the right amount of respect for the 'heavy subject.' Well done
***oh yeah, I definetly second other reviewers in the more beating of KL...
Started to read yr Morcia stories. I really like where this is going, so hope to see it continue.
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Lil note--- when i picture Tamara I sée the actual actress that portrayed her... And can't help but think: NO Allison don't b like that (I associate her with her Allison character in Eureka and she was sooo sweet and cool in that!!!)
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Ideally both her and Kevin (yeah---never liked him) gettheir cummappence
Read a fee chapters in the wrong order... I was intrigued though, so started again in sequence. I like the way u bring in the episodes but adding a little flavour. Great start
Nice slow build up. But glad u decided not yo go further as it would b 'tainted' as PG says by her strong emotions
Always loved their friendship. U write it so well and true to their characters
Haha Emily's reaction.
Well at least DM is not running away from it.
DM: I can't b unbiased...
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DM: u understand what exclusive means?
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:-))))) so funny. I like that u inject humour
KL--- hate the guy. I think they kept him too long on the show. He is, however, very good fodder for any fic where he gets the wrong end of the stick ;-)
As I said b4: Aaaggghhh Kevin Lynch. Such a despicable character,
Yet another great story with a diifficult subject but told with sensibly and respectfully.
Great to see they went to see someone to help them get through that ordeal.
Thx for sharing
I definetly prefer Prince's version too.
DM got good taste ;-)
Nice chapter, showing his softer side and true intentions for her
KL a moron as usual
Short n sweet
Still a good chapter and a step forward for them