Reviewer: stlouiegal
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Date: 06/30/2012 12:39 pm
Title: Chapter 10
You know I loved this chapter. It was so much better than the version on ff. I have waited for this chapter, and you didn't disapoint me at all. You took a very ackward first sexual encounter, and made it so beautiful, and sweet. The after moments got rocky. I guess a little insecurities on both their parts. They managed to get back on track. I love this story, i have from the beginning. I hate to see it end. I have enjoyed your other stories, and surely you will write more great john/joss centered stories. Thank you for this story, it's been a joy,to read.