I liked that you referenced alien and dragon movies, that Reese supposedly is fond of. Didn't he star in a few of those? Love the humor and nice set up for the story with the opening paragraphs then, back to how it all began.

Lionel so charmingly inept with the back of the wedding gown..offer him sex Carter, he'll have it off in one minute flat.

The action with the guns firing was very well done indeed..I felt like I should duck.

'You know I hate you, right'...I LOVE LIONEL what a cute line and so..him.

Wow..a hole in the head for our lady drug dealer, well, as elias would say. tit for tat. very effective ending though. I liked it.

Reese screwed up..big time. and actually, he did. So..how will he ask forgiveness?

'maybe she can think of better things to do with her handcuffs.' ohhh, HOT!

Ok, ok, Lionel has tight jeans on but you didn't mention his bulge. What's with that???

'slumping down into the threadbare armchair he has decided is his. I kinda like that imagine for some obscure reason. John NEEDS an armchair.

If nothing else, they are guilty of abusing the English language..means a lot coming from a Brit. and Harold.

I would be so nervous around him I couldn't speak anyway, so..maybe I could text him.

GRAMMAR NAZI.. some on Fanfic..just saying.

Ohh, Finch has uncovered some real infor on Janet and her associates. Cool! The plot thickens. Love your version of Sherlock Holmes, by the way, the newly updated one. not your's per se..but the English version.

I buy playboy for the pics of the naked women.. hahahahah (fans herself) my goodness.

I just realized, Janet Kline did much better selling drugs than her ex did with the two year old and graphic design business. hummmmm

'I would prefer not to see you on your day off? gotta love a persnickety Finch..which I do and you write so well.

has anyone NOT committed on the 'will you marry me, carter' line? best line EVER! said like Finch in his drugged out state. (you're just in time for ..dinnner!')

You know I had to rush over here to read the M version lol. you don't disappoint, great story and I cannot wait to read you other fics!

So enjoying this story and the very unique setting! Can't wait for the epilogue either!