Reviewer: callih Signed [
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Date: 08/04/2012 1:48 am
Title: Chapter 2
best line of the chapter? 'aren't you going to invite me in..'what are you a vampire or something?" hahahah! loved it!
I got the repeatedly saying her name as he made his moves. I think that was effective, especially when she, in turn gave him HIS name.. at which time she was rewarded very nicely.
He felt her climax building, stoking the fires he had deliberately fanned..higher. A very experienced lover, our John.
Good build up to an exciting moment of interfacing.