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Reviews by callih
CONTROL by ReeseFan75 Rated: NC-17/AO: Restricted/Adults Only!! Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Reese and Carter have the evening off...how will they spend their time together? Will Reese get Carter to give up her precious control?

Rating is for graphic sex scenes... and language
Categories: Season One
Characters: Detective Jocelyn 'Joss' Carter, John Reese
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Explicit Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17299 Read Count: 3599
[Report This] Published: 06/07/2012 Updated: 07/06/2012



Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/04/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the sexual tension and build up..the confidence and skill Reese used to seduce and tempt.

His replies were short and crisp, just like the character on the show. a man of few words, our Mr. Reese. He says the maximum amount of info in the minimum amount of effort.

His confession of 'if you're asking me if I would kill someone for you..unequivocally! what a cool line!

Liked that he watched her at the bar before making his entrance. And how articulate an entrance it was!

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/04/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

best line of the chapter? 'aren't you going to invite me in..'what are you a vampire or something?" hahahah! loved it!

I got the repeatedly saying her name as he made his moves. I think that was effective, especially when she, in turn gave him HIS name.. at which time she was rewarded very nicely.

He felt her climax building, stoking the fires he had deliberately fanned..higher. A very experienced lover, our John.

Good build up to an exciting moment of interfacing.

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/04/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

a guy who is really interested in your fantasies. My kind of guy. does he truly exist other than Mr. Reese? I doubt it.

I love the adult language, the adult themes with no apolgies given. Two mature people enjoying a sexual coupling..really enjoying it. And how.

I like a man that isn't afraid to admit his involvement or share his emotions. I just knew John could be that guy given the right incentive.

You have a knack for sexual tension and delivery. Cool story!

Something Borrowed, Something Blue by Homeric Rated: NC-17/AO: Restricted/Adults Only!! Liked [Reviews - 37]
Summary: In which Carter finds a wedding dress, Reese destroys a tux and Fusco discovers his feminine side
Categories: Season One
Characters: Detective Jocelyn 'Joss' Carter, John Reese
Genres: Action
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12407 Read Count: 2964
[Report This] Published: 07/12/2012 Updated: 08/04/2012



Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Something Borrowed, Something Blue

I buy playboy for the pics of the naked women.. hahahahah (fans herself) my goodness.

I just realized, Janet Kline did much better selling drugs than her ex did with the two year old and graphic design business. hummmmm

'I would prefer not to see you on your day off? gotta love a persnickety Finch..which I do and you write so well.

has anyone NOT committed on the 'will you marry me, carter' line? best line EVER! said like Finch in his drugged out state. (you're just in time for ..dinnner!')

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not quite the answer I hoped for..would it help if I got down on one knee? (just as long as you don't kneecap her, John..just saying. cute, snarky Reese.

'are you sure you don't want something bigger.. how exactly did John mean that???

'he also knows a lot more about fashion that you do.' that's profiling John and that's just wrong.

I thought Lionel looked kinda sexy but then I like to flush toliets in the mall. I LOVE LIONEL.

'Reese and the little glasses guy' GAY??? HAHAHAHAH wait..let me mull that one over for a bit.. hummmmm

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

'maybe she can think of better things to do with her handcuffs.' ohhh, HOT!

Ok, ok, Lionel has tight jeans on but you didn't mention his bulge. What's with that???

'slumping down into the threadbare armchair he has decided is his. I kinda like that imagine for some obscure reason. John NEEDS an armchair.

If nothing else, they are guilty of abusing the English language..means a lot coming from a Brit. and Harold.

I would be so nervous around him I couldn't speak anyway, so..maybe I could text him.

GRAMMAR NAZI.. some on Fanfic..just saying.

Ohh, Finch has uncovered some real infor on Janet and her associates. Cool! The plot thickens. Love your version of Sherlock Holmes, by the way, the newly updated one. not your's per se..but the English version.

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

'This coming from someone who wore sweat pants when I met him...ohhh, BURN, Reese. do not try to match wits with Mr. Finch..

I got all hot when Finch was telling John about the peach garment and the low cut dress. Is it just me people??

And the SHOCKER when we find out about Janet's little side line of a business. Didn't see that coming! Loved the twist though.

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lionel so charmingly inept with the back of the wedding gown..offer him sex Carter, he'll have it off in one minute flat.

The action with the guns firing was very well done indeed..I felt like I should duck.

'You know I hate you, right'...I LOVE LIONEL what a cute line and so..him.

Wow..a hole in the head for our lady drug dealer, well, as elias would say. tit for tat. very effective ending though. I liked it.

Reese screwed up..big time. and actually, he did. So..how will he ask forgiveness?

Reviewer: callih Signed
Date: 08/10/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Again, have to mention the exchange between Lionel and Carter..porn, Star Wars dolls and bad rookie coffee. It don't get any better than that. Excellent character canon shot!

The flowers were nice but John laying on the couch was better. I forgive him.
Foo Fighter tickets for Lionel's kid. Ok, that works, too. and then..

'Josh baby, I want you to come for me now.' ???? OHHHH SHIT! YEAH! need more be said? I need a cigarette! and I don't smoke.



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