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Date: 03/18/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: SURPRISES AND PHONE CONVERSATIONS

oh this was sweet another wedding and the couple teasing on the phone. loving every chapter of this romance

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 07:01 pm Title: FAMILY

fontana is a cutie and my little cousin is the same way.

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: NOW JUST ISN'T THE TIME

that wan't cool at all. you played on john's insecurities and its no coincidence that chris had a story that was the splitting image of john's fears
lol onto the next sage great story again sexy b

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:45 pm Title: WHAT A DAY

now i thought you would have cut teh sx but you didn't loved it and mike having panic attacks lol. am going to the next chapter i absolutely love this story

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:25 pm Title: ENLIGHTEN ME

love how the wedding is coming along, like teh group of people you selecetd to be their friends. strippers hopefully everyone will have fun and i can't wait for the wedding

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: FIRST TIME CONTINUED

pant...pant... fan... fan... fan , girl that was to vivid you were to clear in your descriptions of teh deed, i have to sensor myslf because i am over heating
great loving

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:04 pm Title: DO IT TO ME BABY

damn you did it to me with this chapter, sweet, seductive and girl my pores are breathing in deeply i feel teh heat to this song and damn you made me feel the spot tingle. john is my type of guy.

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 08:10 am Title: WEDDING TRIP

i am so in love with this story and jovan

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 07:44 am Title: CONVERSATIONS

this is just beautiful, all this first time love its sweet.

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 06:48 am Title: SUNDAY WAS A GOOD DAY

sniff...oh john knows how to make a girl swoon

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 06:34 am Title: to make a fool or not to.

lol i loved that he wanted to be her diary and i was blushing for her at his antics they are absolutely sweet together

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:52 am Title: The next day

hell i wish i could wake up to with a man like john in my room. even more so i thought tehy would have done teh deed but john is an honourable man

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:40 am Title: Almost lost

oh, this chapter was so sweet.. i absolutely loved it but what does it mean for john?

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 05:05 am Title: Not as planned

oh snap that one blew up in her face, i am anxious to know what happens next. i feel sorry for van and john is a damn riot playing her like that

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Date: 03/18/2007 - 04:55 am Title: coming out

this is a riot act, you set evangeline up good, he friends were no help, damn john has her figured out and he is going to milk it really good tonight for her. moving onto the next chapter

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