[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 04:42 am Title: INVitation
lol oh this was to much.the cris here he sounds like a cool guy not like the one i see with her on tv , can't stand him. evangeline looks like she is about tomake a big mistake, cris is right taht it will go wrong. john is up to something. am going to read the next chapter to find out great story
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 04:25 am Title: who is it really?
i am on the seventh chapter and already i am bowled over by this story, its more lighter though still playing hard to get she is but i know she will give into john, i mean who wouldn't i knowi would. loved this one. and john just bad with himself listening in on her talk with nora but i love it.
Author's Response: thanks so much. so how the hell do you know T and V?
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2007 - 01:37 am Title: CHAPTER 36 – MAKING THING RIGHT AGAIN
amen. lord she still remembered this story . ok and i admit for a time i completely thought you were done with this story but now that i have spent the better part of two hours or more re reading from the start i am back on the track of this love, this i think is your most go happy , love romance, yes they broke up but you brought them back together and now they are behaving like first time lovers, can't get enough of each other.glad that she made things right with her family and friends. and loved the layla and sai spatt.
and please don't wait to update so long or i'll have to read from the start to get back int the flow of things.thanks all the same for updating
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 36 – MAKING THING RIGHT AGAIN
Thanks for the update. John and van are sot good together and glad everyone is happy for them. Hope john tells her the truth.
Author's Response: me to.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2007 - 03:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 35 - THE WEDDING DAY
thanks for the updated girl i love that dress van was wearing so what has eve worried and john not listen to his mother mmmmmmm happy that they married but john need to tell her what going on.
Author's Response: i do'n't know i guess you will have to wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2007 - 01:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 35 - THE WEDDING DAY
awww i feel all gooey over this i mean the wedding was simple and sweet but i would have liked to know what words they exchanged but none the less i love this story and i loved this chapter that being said just let me know when you are going to make trouble for them either u going to kill john off or the other
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2007 - 01:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 35 - THE WEDDING DAY
awww this chapter was so sweet. girl u make me feel for this coupel. now are they going to have a honeymoon or not? and if i know you well with your stories u always find a way to pull them apart when they have made ground.... please i beg you don't do it to them its perfect the way they are. that means please don't kill john off
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: NO… WHAT PART OF ‘NO’ DON’T YOU GET?
Really, really enjoyed this chapter. John needed to hear those words from Michael. The last scene with John and Evangeline was fabulous. Van getting on one knee propsoing had me in tears. I hope that ring wasn't indeed for the other ewwwllll. Don't kill my boy. I know u love torturing them but he deserves to be Mr Williamson lol.
Author's Response: yes he did. thanks. no it was not. why not? well ok since you asked so nicely.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: NO… WHAT PART OF ‘NO’ DON’T YOU GET?
right now i am a lump of goo for jovan this chapter was so sweet i think i may have a bout of sugar, i loved it and damn john made me get the sniffles...evangeline is a trip
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: NO… WHAT PART OF ‘NO’ DON’T YOU GET?
Sweet chapter and I now hope that you won't write my baby off especially since he has the girl now? Mrs. Evangeline and John Williamson.....lol, that was really cute! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: well then you may not want to read the chapter after then. lol yeah i thought so myself.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:51 am Title: NO… WHAT PART OF ‘NO’ DON’T YOU GET?
lol, i love those little sparring matches they have with each other, and now that uu have updated to the present i do like the direction this story is going, but there is a big buttt, this happy, sweet chapter was just a one time thing u are going to write john off aren't u?
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 11:08 pm Title: NO… WHAT PART OF ‘NO’ DON’T YOU GET?
lol mrs.evangeline and john williamson lol. Can't wait to the next chapter happy mom and van let him know how things going to be. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: welcome
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: UNEXPECTED REVALATIONS (Eva, John, Cris POV)
crazy scenes back and fourth , i really like when u get into their heads, its crazy, i look forward to the next chapter great story
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: UNEXPECTED REVALATIONS (Eva, John, Cris POV)
lol...girl u are funny i mean when i read this i think how the hell do u actually see this in your head, get rid of chris completely, john needs to suffer some more and i hope evangeline gives him a lethal dose of pain.
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: CHAPTER32 – PRESENT, PAST, FUTURE OMNIBUS……..
finally this story is back on track and i couldn't be more happier...... this chapte was explosive but i think i need to know how she found out and just shows up there...