Date: 09/06/2012 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 39
YES! Henry's dead and Spencer is about to get his!
Jovan always!
Date: 09/06/2012 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 27
From businesswoman to ride or die chick...you go Evangeline!!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2012 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter 4
I like this John; dangerous and oh so sexy.
Date: 10/07/2010 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter 9
OKAY! NOW THIS STORY HAS REALLY GOTTEN RIDICULOUS, EVANGELINE WANTS TO BECOME JOHN's PARTNER IN CRIME!
It's such a shame that the author wants to introduce evolvement of the romance angle too soon in this story
whereas, the crime mystery of this story continues to show the story could have been real good and even better enhanced once the romance be introduced far later in the story and produced by Evangeline's mental identity breakdown through captivity by John.
Accordingly my enjoyment has waned because belief is gone, story is now just a cartoon, I'll stay on board for awhile then just quit, only so much I can take, even for a free read.
My criticism is harsh not to abuse, but because very good writing skills have been demonstrated and it is just so a shame that this error of romance too quickly introduced and spoils excellence of the story teling!
Date: 10/07/2010 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 7
The realism of this story continues to grow weaker, a kidnapp victim would not be empathetic, her anger and fear of John would at this time be her controlling state of mind. However, is she pretending empathy to weaken him for another try for escape, we will see!
Date: 10/07/2010 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 9
I like John and Evangeline's conversations, including their conversation in previous chapter and can also tell a romantic interest is building BUT I AM INFURIATED THAT THE PREMISE OF THIS STORY IS EVANGELINE's KIDNAPPING BY JOHN, because it strongly is not realistic at all to their now very casual relationship as if on dates. A different premise should have been chosen for how they get together or this present casual warm communication should certainly take place many months later after many things have happened to cause her as a kidnapped victim to breakdown to him in loss of her initial identity of self and merge kind of into him, that is the only way a kidnapp victim, especially one like Evangeline who is intelligent and not a neurotic crazy, would yield to merge with her captor.
Otherwise this story would have to be written as a comedy!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2010 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter 6
Their communication within John's confession does not sound realistic in view of their opposing positions, also John certainly weakens his need for continuing power over her since he has become too humane whereas he needs to remain more menacing to sustain power by her fear of him.
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2010 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4
Run for your life Vange
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2010 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Damn! Evangeline is not only feisty but brave, to adamantly tell John she will no longer cooperate! I wonder what he'll do? Actually, I don't think he has any bullets in his gun, they were all shot off by the other thug as he fought with him???
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2010 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
It was funny when John told his kidnapp victim Evangeline to wash his clothes after he showered, he spoke to her like she should do it as ike a friend.
This story is really interesting, so different!
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2010 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
love that john is a crook, from his present persona on OLTL, I think he has the nature to be a criminal.