[Report This]Date: 07/01/2007 - 11:02 am Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part Two
Thank you for this chapter.'m really enjoying this story. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2007 - 09:21 am Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part Two
this is the first time i read this story and i reeally reealy luv it cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part Two
okay so i'm greedy and l'm wanting more and soon but i'm willing to be patient about it. this story is really getting deep here and i 'n knee deep into every aspect of this story. You sure are painting and taling a very prolific tale that is intrigueing my mind with each word. i could actuallly see the whole tickling scene it was so cute and visible. I enjoyed it immensely.
Oustanding excellent job stunna,
thank you
jules
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:59 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part Two
Yeah john you found it now only if you guys do something about it soon and fast i'm waiting lol. John is right he is a n ass and can't wait to she dumb him. thanks for the updated I realy like this story and glad for two updated.
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part One
wow i just love these talks btween john and van. John makes a good point you have to be happy in what you doing. Van wake up that jerk not the one for you john is. Thanks for the updated life happens. Kendell she is so nasty lol but can't be made at her.
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part One
wow simply wow is all i can say on to the next chapter without post hast.....
outstanding,
jules
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:07 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part Two
It's about to go down with these two and i can't wait. All i want is a first kiss, OK they could get carried way. John is about to realise who is dream woman is. LOve the sexy outfits our girl E is wearing. Thought John would have stared a bit.
YOu are very talented, keep up the great work!!
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:03 pm Title: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For -- Day Three, Part One
Stunna, You're a darling 2 chapters and it's not Christmas. I thought i was hallucinating but no it was a real update. Girl the wait was morethan worth it. Loved all the character interactions...esp my favs J&E. The hammock scene was ooooooooo so fun and real. When are these two going to kiss??
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
Van is soooo transparent its not even funny. She loves John and doesn't even realize it nor does he for that matter. I'm ready for some sparks; an embrace that lingered just a little too long or an innocent peck that turned into swapping saliva or second base would be nice. Its torture I tell ya 'watching' them as best friends which is wonderful don't get me wrong, but a little somethin' somethin' wouldn't hurt would it? lol Furthermore, she needs to drop that zero Alan-Michael...something's not right with him. I wouldn't be surprised if he's doing the horizontal mambo with his secretary. lol I'm digging all the relationships and friendly banter in this story. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
Hmmm...John certainly seems captivated..it's subtle, but the signs are there. They are hot for each other. They don't even know it yet. I wonder if Patrick noticed Kendall. I like them too. Even though they both are pretty nuts!! LOL!! How long can he be a manwhore? hahah
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
welcome back, love your writing. Well I can see John getting to know the new and improved Van.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
OK i read it 2X,. I think John is going to be a bit uneasy around E as he becomes aware of his feeling. I could see him giving her long looks/ stares. Eva is in denial. I think she's afraid of thinking of her feelings for John.
Let the love begin!!
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
Bless your heart for this chapter, a wonderful job. I like the pace ..just right. There is so much tension between J&E right now..i swore that John was going to grab her and kiss her.
I like that he is slowly realising his feelings for her. He is going to fall hard. She is the only woman he really enjoys being around.
The strength of the story is the dialogue- characterisation, conflict, interest ...perfecto.
Thanks much and i hope things went well with your studies.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
Another great chapter.
Please finish school already...I can't wait for your next installment.
Thank You
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 01:58 pm Title: Your Song -- Day Two, Part Two
I loved this chapter.John is falling hard and fast.And I think Evangeline is too.Great chapter.