[Report This]Date: 02/19/2007 - 08:38 am Title: Heartache
Wow why is caitlyn leaving? I don't balm thomas for being mad and upset but eve in her own way protect him and her self. this is just getting crazy and crazy thank for the update.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2007 - 08:23 am Title: Heartache
WHOA!!!!! i can't wait for more.....
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Thirty years in the making
OMG!! Don't tell me Thomas dies before he even gets to know. Eve is a cold hearted bitch. And Caitlyn, what is up with her? She's married to a man that loves her. Why would she conspire to be in Boston the same weeks as John? And John, is he gullible or what? On the one hand, perhaps Evangeline does react quickly, but it's so obvious that Caitlyn has it in for her. I don't like this secret over everyone's heads either. Talk about drama..LOL! On a lighter note, I love L&L, and I especially love how Layla took care of Sherry.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Thirty years in the making
WOW THIS CRAZY I HOPE THOMAS IS ALRIGHT. THANKS FOR THE UPDATED.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 07:32 pm Title: Thirty years in the making
Loved this chapter! I know that Caitlyn is John's half-sister, but please, please, allow Evangeline to give her the "beatdown" that she is asking for. Caitlyn obviously never matured beyond the emotional level of a teenaged girl. She is still fuming over the fact that Evangeline captured the prize, John. Somehow Caitlyn has conveniently forgotten that John was never in to her and his heart is totally Evangeline's. No amount of scheming has allowed her to gain entry into his heart. John is kind and in many ways naive when it comes to Caitlyn. I can't believe that this hussy is still trying to make a play for John.
I hope that Thomas' heart attack wasn't caused by Eve telling him the truth. I'm certain that his former girlfriend will make an appearance at the hospital. I hope that John is able to forgive Evangeline from keeping the secret from him. This could work to Caitlyn's advantage. However, It wasn't Evangeline's secret to tell. They romised to be honest with each other and John will be devastated especially after he told Evangeline that their love made him whole.
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for giving John/Evangeline a true relationship!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Haunting Past
Great chapter! If Kathy did give birth to twin girls, is there any chance that the girls are Brooke and Caitlyn? Is it possible that Coli, and not Thomas is the biological father? Finn was gone for four more years than his actual 6 years prison sentence. During that time was he investigating him and John's past? Finn is so set on destroying Evangeline/John, will he an Caitlyn join forces to ruin John's art showing?
Very interesting dynamics! Eve, Kathy and Caityln are the catalysts of way too much drama in the lifes on Evangeline and John. Bring it on, it will on make them stronger and more devoted to each other.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Haunting Past
A boy and girl??? what dam this is crazy girl. Finn man be with your family and caitlyn is not worth it you have a husband and a daugter. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 03:47 pm Title: Haunting Past
Good gracious! What a mess! From John/Van/Caitlyn to Finn/Brooke/John to Todd/Van/John to Thomas/Eve/Kathy to kathy/Colin (huh?!) and now miss Marsala is putting her hat in the ring. Who did I leave out...Michelle-a-ho!! Damn, my head is spinning.
Caitlyn/John: I don't get that twit and he's stupid for trying to reason with her
Van/Todd: that was a little too obvious for her not to put 2 & 2 together about Caitlyn plus their talk about their relationship was a trip too
Colin/Kathy: *scratch head* Did they have a thing too and if so, how come she's totally clueless? He seems like a snake to me.
Eve/Kathy: Eve is a son of a bitch (so what she's female, she's got some big hairy round ones)
Finn/Brooke: I'm not understanding him. What is he trying to do? Why would he give them his real name?
Thomas/Eve: Two ppl who should've never gotten together
Marsala/John: What's up with that? Seeing Johnny Mac all grown up she can't help the temptation?
John/Van: “I’m quick, I promise this time I’ll be quick.” They're always interesting to watch but Van is sooo wrong to keep this secret from her husband.
I guess the only people without agendas in this story is LaLa and Lily/Michael/Austin. And what boggles my mind is how in the world are they going to hold onto innocence!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 03:04 pm Title: Haunting Past
Hmmmm..wait a minute..Colin? LOL! I can't believe all these people are resurfacing. Damn, this is going to be one hell of a show..LOL..I can't wait!!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2007 - 01:01 am Title: The real you
They are related..LOL..At first, I thought they weren't, then I thought they were, then they weren't..I kept waffling..LOL..wow, now isn't that going to be a stunner? Todd is an amazing investigator..lol..and Eve is getting drunk. I hope John finds out soon. I love their closeness and bond, and their lovemaking, but man it's like a cloud hanging over their heads.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2007 - 01:10 am Title: The real you
ewwwww I can't belive you had kaite fall for her brother ewww but one hell of a twist i was kinda hoping ti was fin but this just got good. thankd for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: The real you
Eve is killing me here. How could she be so cold hearted on this and to keep it from Thomas and John after all these years...just too much. I so agree with Evangeline here on the Cait thing. John just doesn't know what type of power he has over women do he? But I have a funny feeling that Caitlyn might turn out to be his sister which would be a ewww and a hell naw for me for that means Caitlyn will be around John through the family....ewwww and hell naw indeed!
Thanks for the update..I need a J/E fix...innocence style!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 07:08 pm Title: Getting to the truth
Frist Thanks for the update. Glad that Layla share her fears with Larenz and his x not going to stop, Lay had a wonderful Valentine and I love the toe ring too sweet. John and Evangeline always excite love them. So Quinn is Finn. McCoy and McCoy alright. Now Catilyn realize that all John wanted was and is a friendship. John is so sweet and understanding I just feel sorry when all this hit the fan. But Ms B this was a good chapter I truly enjoy every word. Looking forward for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 06:07 pm Title: Getting to the truth
OMG OMG OMG so the person i think is thomas child. OMG that is going to fuck them all up to know and catie has john niece WHAT!!! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE GIRL!!!!.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 11:50 am Title: Getting to the truth
Hmmmm..don't get too close Johnny..LOL! She may misconstrue your friendly gestures for something else. As she will probably..however, I'm thinking they may be related..haha..I love Todd and Andrea working together. They're too cute! Loving Layla and Larenz too..Layla is so insecure though, I feel for her. I'm not liking Evangeline keeping this secret though for much longer, but the reality is that Evangeline and Eve are very similar.