
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 11:11 am Title: Getting to the truth
Great chapter... I feel a big plot twist coming! I know Evangeline will not be thrilled about the budding friendship between John and Caitlyn.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 10:16 am Title: Getting to the truth
This chapter was fantastic.I would say more but this cold has my head swimming and I can't think.Great job.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:48 am Title: Getting to the truth
John is an idiot! As much as I love him and all that he does, he is a very trusting idiot who will always believe the good in others but he needs to know that girl is off her rocker and is looking at him as more than a friend. She still wants john and I hope he realizes that before she does something stupid again. Loving the whole mess with Eve. It's going to come out and I have a feeling in teh worst possible way too.
I hope life gives you a break soon Ms. B. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2007 - 05:56 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
Eve's playing a dangerous game and Van's caught in the middle. I hope Van has thick skin b/c she's going up against a seasoned barracuda who fights dirty. Now why in the hell would Van have thoughts of another man? If this supposed man looks, smells, acts, tastes, breathes and loves like John McBain, then maybe she does. The locket was so sweet, Lily has her daddy wrapped around her little finger. Another blast from the past: Brooke! I kinda felt sorry for her (who knew). She probably needs that job being a single mother and all while her baby's daddy is locked up. Loved the red dress - damn, she can still fit into it?! That's disgusting lol. The oooh la la loving was mmmm mmmm good. Next chapter please...
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
Bradley, I am loving this---you have me invested in all the characters and even the secondary ones, too! Very engaging story!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:18 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
WOW! That's all I can say is wow. I was not expecting that but I'm glad that's what we got. Amazing girl! I felt that passion through computer and Ms. B you are the queen of J/E love. But I do have a bad feeling that it will all go down at the art show. I hope not but I see it coming. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
That was some intense lovemaking..lol..I love how she teased him earlier in his office. Something tells me that the shit is going to hit the fan at this show. Poor John. I don't like that Evangeline is keeping it from him, and Eve. You'd think she would have learned from the past. VD dinner was awkward. To top it off, Brooke works there. Geez..it's like everyone is popping back into their lives. All these people from the past! I think it's high time Layla tells her mom about Larenz. LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Valentine's Day Romance
I loved this chapter.The seduction in John's office was fantastic.John giving Lily a locket just like the one he gave Evangeline was very sweet.Eve is a real piece of work.And the love scene at the end was smokin'.Great chapter chica.
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
I was going to comment on Eve Lil party Evangeline at John office Brooke. But after I read the love of John and Evangeline I want to smoke and I don't smoke now I need a shower. Ms B you have wrote some HOT chapter before but this one awesome. John took it in overtime the man had the woman crawling away from him now that what I talking about HOT LOCA. The words of Florence Evans LOCA LOCA LOCA Ms B you have definitley satisfy this JOVANSLUT. Looking forward the art show!!!!!!!! Until then Ms B I applaud you because you wrote Hell of chapter. You put double HOT in ROMANCE.
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2007 - 09:49 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
great chapter, hot chapter, loved van in that red dress, reminded me of innocent, i`m still sick of eve, glad they all had a great vday, loved the gift john and van gave thomas and eve, man john and van were hot, hot, hot, that was an off the chart love scene, john really took van to school, had her running from him, that was awesome, boy they are so in love, don`t let eve and her secrets mess up john`s show, and marriage, i hope van tells him , because i don`t think eve will, loved the vintage jovan, right back to their first time,
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Valentine's Day Romance
Dam the was some intersting love making btween them something tells me that it going to be some dram at the art show. that moment btween him and lily so soweet. thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 01:57 pm Title: Evangeline meets World
Awwww..how great was Van with her sister?! I knew she'd be happy for her. Van was also awesome with Caitlyn, putting her on notice. I, like John, wanted to give her the benefit of the doubt. What a mistake that is!! LOL! But Eve...wow, I don't know how they are going to recover from her secrets. She's cold hearted, and Thomas had a lot to do with that, but to continue to keep secrets, destructive and devastating secrets. Bad! Very Bad! And now Evangeline is stuck in the middle. Talk about drama!!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Evangeline meets World
Van may not agree but her and eve are alike in some ways willing to put a bitch in her place trying to take their husbands away and procted their family. i think i know who the child is. Thanks for the updated girl.
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Evangeline meets World
Oh man...Eve is an itch to the fullest! What is wrong with her? Thomas wouldn't have left her over that child..he would have took care of him or her but wouldn't have left Eve. She should have had more confidence in her husband and marriage yet she decide to keep this secret and is willing to destroy everyone in order to keep it a secret. It will blow up in her face and my hope is that she won't take John and Evangeline with her. Poor Evangeline! She's in a no win thing with no way out but I think/know John and Evangeline are strong enough to survive this...it just will be hard to read the aftermath of this mess. And Caitlyn is an idiot. Why won't she let John go? I know she can't be that dumb to think that after all this time..she and John would have worked if Eva didn't "steal" him from her? BS if I heard of it. I wouldn't let that nut teach my child!
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 03:22 pm Title: Evangeline meets World
Eve is Evel(sorry I couldn't resist.)Evangeline better do the right thing by her family and tell John the truth.She can't let Eve bully her into doing things her way.Oh and Layla was so cute.I'm glad she finally told Evangeline about her love for Lorenz.Great chapter.