
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Evangeline meets World
well, well, well, my hate for eve has risen, she is evil and vial, typical scared rich woman i guess, she can mess up her marriage, because she and thomas marriage has been a totaly mess anyway, but no way would i let her ruin mind, van better use her head and tell her man, john is not like them, he will denounce mcbain name before he goes along wih these lies, van better put john and her children first, please let van do the right them, and not mess up her family, eve is wrong on all levels to try and threaten people to get what she wants, she would just have to die, i would call her bluff, she is not going to die and leave thomas for kathy, and get the straight jacket for caitlyn, she needs to be catred off, her john obsession is off the chart, van needs her man to fight these enemies, andrea can`t keep a secret, i knew her big mouth would tell it, now you have me so worried about my couple
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
OLTLFantimes10, I must say that you are one amazing storyteller. I am hooked on the entire Innocence series. Your passion, creativity and imagination are unparallel to any other author on the board IMO. Please don't ever stop telling this magic love story that is John and Evangeline.
I love ME and REG for playing the part on the screen and I love you for telling the amazing story in Fan Fiction. Great work..
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
Please, please just let Eve tell Thomas what she found out. It's time she found some faith in her marriage. Strangely I think Thomas is the one that needs to believe now. He'll stick with her regardless of whether he and Kathy have a child. It's been 30 years and while he's still 'attracted' to Kathy, what he has with his family now is solid!
I love the way you write John/Evangeline in your stories, but particular this series. John speaking elogquently? So this is what it's like, huh? LOL..Loved his talk with Caitlyn..Can't wait for Eva's talk with her. And boy Todd's reaction will probably be hilarious!
Lilly and Mikey too cute!
Good job B!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 - 02:46 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
Ok ..where to start? First off, I'm glad that Lily is ok and I really liked how she was with Michael. I could so picture Lily and Michael in that hospital bed like that...too cute! Todd and Andrea on the case while Eve is going nuts..like it, Thomas and Kathy...I'm so glad that he told her the true and that he needs to be with his wife..the woman he loves. Good for Thomas. Now let's get to the real...Caitlyn was and still is a nut. WTF is wrong with her....Evangeline stole John from her? Come on hun...John didn't want you from jump yet no matter how many times he tells her that...she doesn't care...she was suppose to be with John ..in her mind. Idiot...twit and very delusional. I feel bad for her child and husband for her mind isn't right. This chapter was so pact with good stuff that John and Evangelin had to come last. What a great partnership they have! They really are a great team and they love each other and they family deeply and I'm glad to see that nobody can't break them up. But I do feel that trouble is on the way for them....but they will get through it!
Yes. I'm long winded but this chapter was just too good....Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 - 12:18 am Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
man kathy needs to let it go, the man is not leaving, i am glad he made that clear, i am so glad lily is fine, poor eve is going to tear the family apart, trying to hide this kid, go on and tell the truth, and stop trying to get todd in deeper, now van has a little wind of it, i guess she will make it even worse, if she finds out she better tell john, or she is messing up, thomas will surely be through with kathy over this, a good thing, i loved john and caitlyn, and yes caitlyn is still a delusional nut, like i thought, let it go woman and seek help
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
Thanks for the update. I like the conversation between John and Catilyn. Boy Catilyn still crazy but I like how John handle her because he see she touch too, I can't wait for Todd find out about Catilyn and Eve is going crazy Todd has to do a reality check and let her know Lily is what's important now. So Evangeline know it more to Kathy and Todd and Andera knows. Love this story glad Ms Lily okay and how she help her brother with his fear love it.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:44 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
I can't wait tell Evangeline knows that Layla has been gallivanting right under her nose with the man she is getting hot under the collar for...or perhaps it would be better put the man she wants to butter her bread...... And Layla had some nerve speaking to Cait that way!
well i already told you about Thomas but i want him with Kathy. Shit if your gonna cheat do it with some semblance of self worth (oxymoron anyone?) . Kathy needs to take that big scarlet A and wear it with pride! And while she is wearing it she need to go bite her thumb at Eve and then tell that stuck up, cant keep a man bitch where to go! Who does Eve fucking think she is anyway? She isn't worth all the drama she brings...now if only Thomas would wise up and see that Thomas is the one for him...and that isnt me being bias either....Kat and Thom are soulmates...i heard it through the grapevine
Evangeline is bold! Hugging up on Layla's man like that right in front of her husband. Woman thou art loose!
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
All dam love the talk between thomas and eve and van know and caite love your husbnad not van husband hefa. thankf for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Past and Present~ Heart to Heart
I have not even read it yet but just want to say YEA for posting this :)
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: Past and Present~ Collide
Kathy was a little virginal minx (oxymoron perhaps) wasn't she? The jury is still out on this pairing. I believe wholeheartedly that she loves him but was/is it love that Thomas really feels for her? If so, why was she different from all the others? His wife is such a cold fish, so his philandering wasn’t a stretch but what attracted him to Eve is the first place?
Since high school, Van has never enjoyed being photographed. I like her unassuming demeanor regarding her beauty; confident, not conceited. The playful banter in the bathroom was cute although lip color always brings out a woman’s features (imo). John is such a sap, a hopeless romantic when it comes to his lady love and children. The show’s concept sounds very exciting.
Yet my favorite scenes were Layla and John’s reactions when they got the phone call about Lily’s accident and John and Van’s apprehension about their daughter…very nicely done Bradley.
It should be very interesting to see McBain’s reaction to their child’s teacher and the discovery of everyone’s connection in this menagerie.
Get to work missy, pronto!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: Past and Present~ Collide
you had me laughing with the Lily stuff. John really seemed shock that his little "angle" talk back to people! lol needless to say the man is on something if he doesn't realize what a hellion that little girl really is...we have a word for her in Creole...and its not pretty!
Am i supposed to like Kathy and Thom? Because I'm starting to like them together.... You use the world harlot...i heart that word....Kathy showed some fire...and boy was she bold touching Thom like that in public. Isn't she Catholic? They wouldn't like that one bit....
jovan was so cute...J telling her to take all that 'crap' off her face and saying how she looks even more beautiful without it...if its even possible
[Report This]Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:23 am Title: Past and Present~ Collide
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned..Eve is the epitome of that motto..LOL! How hot was Thomas and Kathy? Damn, no wonder Eve was such a bitch. This woman got to him. He's in love with her. Oh sure he loves his wife, and they've both paid dearly for their actions, but whew..I'm so glad Lily is okay. My heart was in my throat, and talk about drama, now that John and Van know Caitlyn is back, and she's Lily's teacher. Plus Caitlyn noticed her Aunt Kathy getting mighty chummy with Thomas..oh boy bring it on..
Oh,and I forgot..I loved how John was describing the basis of his show. This man is deeply in love with his wife. So sweet..
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:06 pm Title: Past and Present~ Collide
DRAM DRAM DRAM caitlyn kathy and the mcbains all there it own and wanted to see what they have to say to her. thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2007 - 01:39 pm Title: Past and Present~ Collide
I loved this chapter.It was beautiful,heartfelt and heartbreaking at the same time.Great job chica.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:07 am Title: Past and Present~ Collide
Thanks so much for this chapter. I love how John/Evangeline love each other so completely. From the first moment John laid eyes on Evangeline, she has had his heart and love. John's description of his love for Evangeline to Layla and his artistic promoters brought tears to my eyes. Loved it! It's amazing how perceptive children are. Lily didn't know why, but she knew her teacher, Caitlyn, was treating her differently, staring at her. Lily picked up on Caitlyn's negative vibe immediately. As for Thomas, Kathy and Caitlyn, all of them are due a serious beatdown!! Kathy is extremely bold to stroke Thomas' face in public and Thomas should never have visited her at the office or her apartment or allowed the public display of affection. Please tell me that Caityln is not their love child???? Can't wait for the showdown in your next chapter.