[Report This]Date: 04/02/2007 - 12:00 am Title: Full Circle
This particular chapter made me cry. I was totally able to relate to John's hurt and anger over Evangeline's betrayal. When he told her that she had his heart and he begged her to protect and take care of it really struck home with me.
John and E share a love that most people only dream of. Thank you for bringing this love story to life. I was touched by every series and every chapter.
By far this is my most favorite story.
Great work.
Author's Response: Awwweee Pam you're gonna make me cry now! LOL... You're very welcome for bringing this love story to life. I do love them they are one of my favorite incarnations of John and Evangeline. They love hard and they love forever.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: Full Circle
Another great story ....can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 - 01:20 pm Title: Muse~ Moving forward
*wails* I DIED! goodness. I thought we agreed on a knife since you wouldnt do a sword? *glares* I cant believe "I" died for 'my daughter' I always knew kids would be the death of me .....
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 - 11:41 am Title: Full Circle
AWWWWW i'm so happy for our couple and of course lazer and layla very very sweet. Thanks for the update and can't wait to read about the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2007 - 11:08 pm Title: Muse~ Moving forward
Wow that so sad the she died my god. poor van and brooke. thanks for the update lily to cute do the daddie kiss.
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2007 - 10:04 pm Title: And it all comes crashing down
My girl - you have rocked this story!! I loved watching them grow as a couple and family. My heart just broke when they were in the hospital. I don't want Caitlyn or Finn to have any part of being McBains - they don't deserve it!!!
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: And it all comes crashing down
this story should me turned into a mini-series. I love this story. I've never read a love story so rich and full of emotion. The entire series is just supperb!!
Great job
Author's Response: Thanks so much Pam! I do love them oh so much in this story. I've watched them grow from insecure high school seniors to college students and now parents of two amazingly smart and funny children! They love hard and deep and that's what I always try to show w/ this John and Evangeline
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: The show must go on
It about to go down thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: I didn't mean to...
OneLife,
I am so sad to see this story come to an end. You've done a remarkable job with the entire series. This is by far my most favorite series. If this story has to come to an end, please write another Innocence story.
I honestly think you should think about publishing this as a book.
Awesome work.
Pam
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: I didn't mean to...
BROOKE WHAT COULD BE HIS DAUGHTER OMG!!!! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 12:39 pm Title: Daddy Kisses
Kathy Thomas and Eve....wow and man..that's all I can say. I don't know why I don't like Caitlyn..ok I do know why I don't like her but I wish John would feel the same way but that's not him to turn his back on ppl even if he should. I'm glad to see Lily having a good time with her dad. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Daddy Kisses
kathy i sgetting on my nevers she up to know good but i still feel bad for her. layla and lazer are trip but you feel the love with them. So thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2007 - 09:59 am Title: Confessions Pt. 1
OMg this is crazy so who is the other daughter? thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Confessions Pt. 1
I don't like the fact that John still doesn't know. Thomas knows now, and he's in charge, but it still feels wrong for John to be in the dark. I guess Thomas and Eve are perfect for each other..lol..loved Todd "visiting" Caitlyn..lol..she's in for a world of shock. And how about Evangeline threatening Kathy?! Damn..I actually feel for Kathy. This trip, the show..events that are going to be chock full of drama..lol
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2007 - 12:07 pm Title: Heartache
I guess they are perfect for each other after all. Didn't mind the backstory on them, it was needed. Now what of the ramifications..hmmm..I guess Thomas is going to confront Kathy. And what to make of Caitlyn? I still can't understand why she is hooked on John still? She's got a great and more than understanding husband. Geez, what a loon..LOL!