[Report This]Date: 05/07/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
WOW is all I can say about this fic girl!!! Bravo!!!
You know a story is good when I start it one night and finish it by the following afternoon lol it was off the chain girl and that was the illist twist natali done lost her mind tha was awesome totally didnt see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
Whoa! Now this is a twist..glad Clive got was what coming to him, but now Natty is on the warpath..lol..
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2007 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 15
DAMN!!!!!!!!! Marceline that as GOOD...I can't WAIT to read the final installament! Batty Natty on the loose lol!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2007 - 11:00 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG I just read the last 2 chapters of this and I can't wait til you give us the first chapter of the next story.I know it will be great.This was a great story.Next please.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 15
I know this is terrible to say but it couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.
This is bittersweet b/c I enjoyed the story and hate to see it end yet I'm excited to see what comes next with your thrid installment.
Glad to know you're better....my thoughts and prayers are with you.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Just popped over here to see what if anything new was happening, and was very pleasantly surprised to see this updated! I LOVED this story, and the shocking ending has me eagerly anticipating the next installment of the trilogy. (I'm sure I'll be stalking the board looking for the follow-up! LOL)
Awesome work! Thank you!
JD
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
just want to say bop. loved that turn of events. now what is natalie up to? why was she undercover? how long has she been watching john and van? bop? infact when did she excape the hospital?
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, this is so good, please update soon.
Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh boy I just read the last couple of chapter to catch up. I have to say it was good chapter but this one was goood. I have to admit when I was reading the chapter when Rex was talking to John about the red head I thought to myself what going happen the woman going show up a they door step then I thought she was the surpise but her to be Ruby, So now we got crazy redhead on the loose. Good chapter and I love the twist.
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was a smooth ending...thank you...enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 15
yhat was so good, poor Nat, more please
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh Lawd! You bring that crazy nut into the story! Well at least I'll know it will be a off the chain part three to this saga. I just hope John and Evangeline can make it!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. Girl you just knock me out with that twist ooooooo i love it when is said black wig i'm like naw oooooo dind't see that coming good twist very good one. Can't wait to the next story love it. Thanks for writting this story and thanks for the updated
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter 14
Yes they going to get married. So nash and tony so dind't see that coming lol. MMMMM I frist thought junior was going to bring big red. Twist after twist love it. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2007 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 15
WOW! What a twist. Can't wait until your next installment.