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Reviewer: Rosanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2007 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 11

Aw, poor Rex. He's in love! I wish John and Evangeline could have spent more time together. Bummer! But they did have to run interference. Now about this Bristol dude, not liking him at all!

Reviewer: Cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter.Rex and Junior too funny but Rex does have a lot of explaing to do.And all I can say about Clive is, Run Bristol run.Great chapter.

Reviewer: passionflife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh boy let the good time Roll. John on his way to see Clive. Great chapter thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh no, I smell trouble for John. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid b/c Evangelin needs him. He needs to think it through before acting on this one b/c it could cost him his freedom. And poor Rex, I actually felt bad for the boy but he does have a lot of explaining to do.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: WWEFANFORLIFE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11

OH yeah it on go john go see clive and kick that ass. rex and junior to funny and it so true men act like five year olds lol. thanks for the update

Reviewer: Angela C. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

I wonder what Rex wants? Maybe he is coming for his girlfriend and to give some info to Eva and John. My heartbroke a bit in this chapter for Evangeline and John but I really do hope/believe they will get through this together b/c they are stronger than those forces against them now. Keep it comin' hun. I might not post a review all the time but I do love the stories great writers like you and others keep putting out.

Reviewer: Cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 10

I love this story.Please keep it coming.John and Evangeline's love story needs to be told by us because obviously writers on that show don't see the magic that we see.Now on to my favorite part(besides the love scene.)Don't bend over in the show.That's my John.Too funny.

Reviewer: WWEFANFORLIFE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 10

Rex coming ooo this is about to get good. Don't bend over the shower he helped him out like he said he would. I hope john get that jackass soon and kick his ass bad. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: passionflife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

Enjoying your story don't stop writing I haven't lost interest so keep the finger going. I like how John interrogate Ricker and got what he didn't and them told the man don't bend over in the shower(pricless). John and Evangeline loving is my favorite. Now Rex is town. Please keep giving us JOVAN loving the story has to be told since TPTB haven't realize it yet. Please keep the fanfic coming even if they reunite it alway good to read other writer material. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 10

Girl you do have someone who is still interested in this wonderful tale....quite a few folks actually, so I hope you continue. Now on to the story, I really think that Clive was behind the attack but I really think that someone else is sending the hate mail to Evangeline. Someone that has a past with her who might feel like she stole something...or someone...from them. I know I'm most likely wrong with this train of thought but I always think this person has something to do with anything when it comes to something wrong with my couple.

thank you so much for the update and I hope you keep up with the story!

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

What a freaking asshole! urghhhh That PUNK SOB won't stand up to a real man...bastard! Somehow, some way, Van & John must get justice in very public way. I felt so sorry for John when Layla and Junior gasped in horror at his scars. However his lady is there by his side no matter what...and so shall he be there for her. Can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: JoVanfan4evr Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 10

Marceline

I just love this story and I hope you continue to write stories.

Reviewer: BJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 10

This was excellent. I wonder if OLTL will ever do a true scene where a relative or friend sees John's scars and reacts accordingly; or will all of his scars become magically healed? Please continue this story!

Reviewer: MorrisonJD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 9

Toomey's? LOL
You mean the same Toomey that went to the prom with Harriet Tubman?


Great chapter!

Reviewer: Cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

Poor Van.I hope she and John get that pyscho good. And I hope that your past is behind you and your happy.No woman should have to go through that.

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