[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Dam poor van and any other woman who goes thu that. Sometimes it takes us a long time to see the truth and sometime it takes us one day. Thanks for the updated and gald van told and john is going to in that bitch clive.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
What can I say...excellent chapter. Very well written. Unfortunately, Clive was Van's life lesson she had to learn and very fortunate for her, John is the other life lesson she had to embrace. He's the real man that truely loves her for her.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter love it and thanks for sharing yours also your friend personal life it can help someone. I alway say a story is and always someone story. Love the chapter love how John listen and show it love for her. Now I curious to see how they handle Clive I glad he finally met his match, Its always someone bigger then you but the funny thing about old big bad Clive he didn't mess with the mens I wonder why. Looking forward the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
First of all thanks for the update , poor Van and women who are in situations like hers. Clive is a bitch, he wont hit her because she witll put a name to his behavior. Marceline we learn from our mistakes and we get stronger.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
What an unfortunate and scary predicament to be in. Whether it takes seven months, or seven years, you've realized it, marceline..and so did Van. I love when John and Evangeline are open and honest with each other. Together, they make a formidable team. I love how John used her words back to her. Of course, they need to deal with Clive. John is right.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes John...get rid of that fool Clive as soon as possible! I can't believe that he did that stuff to Evangeline...Clive is a weak man no doubt about that now and I hope that John and his friends will protect Evangeline from this guy...b/c I still think he had someone attack her.
Thanks for the update and happy New Year!