[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 - 07:03 am Title: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2
Okay so like i know i told you i was NOT going to read this chapter or leave you a review and i was going on strike until...yada yada yada, but i just couldn't do it to you...this chapter was entirely too short, but i could live with it....two more chapters and its done eh? Well i totally disagree with that notion I would say give us at least four more but its your story and you are the author so ulitmately its your call.....update as soon as possible though. OH YEAH! I only got two more then like i'm done YAY! Will i hope to be done...lol...But who knows as you pointed out i have an attendency to add one or two more chapters to an already closed story, but thats how the cookie crumbles isn't it...wink wink...lol...enough chatting laters....Jules
Author's Response: you always say that and do i ever take you on? NOOOOOOOO! well that means the end is near. yeah and then you'll add another one as soon as you close one maybe two.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2
oh girl you do betrayal well. i can't believe that evangeline's own family would do her like this? i hope she never forgives that fart of a heifer ever. and thrope or john, whats really his deal. why he keep twisting the knife. its over , just throw everyone out teh room and show her how much he loves her as he claims. but i love teh whole espionage thing going on.
Author's Response: thank you. lol me neither lol too funny. i don't know but john /thorpe sure as hell got some splaining to do to van. thank you
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2
WWEFan, you're not the only who's confused but like you, I'm hanging in til the very end. If John just met Elise then who the hell is the real Hamilton Thorpe?
Author's Response: hey you need to re read this story too all the answers are in it. you'llknow in the next chapter who is who.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2
dam this story gets crazy and crazy i like but still don't understand it lol. thanks for the update girl
Author's Response: then re read it till you get it all the answers are in the story.
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
i loved it, i loved that van didn't flinch , she didn't back down. strong will i love it. i hated that you made her feel sorry for elise to finally break, and i hated that thorpe/john asshole is treating her like some casual person, the ass slept with her and thats what he does. i hope she hits him in his nuts real good. i want retribution for van. thorpe and elise must pay.
but i loved the chapter can't wait for your next update. thanks sexy b
Author's Response: knew you would.hell no why should she back down? i know but hey its van decsion what she does with elise i know thorpe/john arsehole is going to pay. well lets hope the next chapter and the last one has them paying dearly.
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 09:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
Van is one tough Cookie isn't she? Loved it when she told 'Thorpe' to eff off.
Author's Response: yeah well you know she gotta have some spunk ain't she?
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
Like way to keep your kool Van...
But SB she better kick elise's arse soon, do you hear me?
J
Author's Response: its all about the coolness that is van
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 12:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
van is a tough cookie. she didn't break under pressure. though she should have let elise as rot in that cell they had her in. girl this just got more interesting, coke and stuff what the hell? u didn't tell me all of this was included. i am calling your as later.
Author's Response: thats how i want her to be. well i thought about making elise pay but wait and lets see what van does. why would i tell you the plot? lol
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 10:59 am Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
Getting interesting, you do have a way of dragging things out. LOL!! Truly appreciate your writing for us.
Author's Response: no worries its like one of my last 4 stories i will be doing , no more dragging out.
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2007 - 10:35 am Title: CHAPTER 10 – YOU’RE THE ‘MOLE’ OPERATION
thanks for the update who set her up lol i like this van go fuck yourself
Author's Response: well wait and you'll see who set her up.
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2007 - 06:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – ITS OVER
Oh no he didn't...no he didn't just eff her brains out then had her arrested?!!!! *stumping my sister-girl foot with hands on my hips* Oh Johnny Mac, you got some splaining to do homie and with the quickness too! Who is the real Thorpe and who was that older asshole that obviouisly set her up? Inquiring minds want to know....at least this anxious mind does.
Thanks for the update and ummm, another update very soon would be appreciated. PEACE
Author's Response: yes he did. but its the job you know what i mean? you willknow about the real thorpe soon when i post th next two chapters. welcome
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2007 - 11:12 am Title: CHAPTER 9 – ITS OVER
girl john negative aspects can't outweigh the charming aspects that makes me love him more oh and evangeline to. you seduce me with the passion and then the next you rip it out right from under me and throw us back into a turmoil of wants and lonnging its torturous. i had to reread the last chapter because, and then i came here to catch up some more. why the hell is van being arrested and where the hell is that low down dirty ass cousin of hers. seriously if van trashes her ass then i ain't mad at all. and you better make john come correct even if he have to make love to her right in that room there , make sure evangeline listens to his side, i always knew there was a reason for what he did and why he did now i am going back to the last chapter .
Author's Response: i know huh. well i like them both. well seems like you have been reading my diary , damn . maybe she will. maybe not i will se what i can do for thm both.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2007 - 07:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – ITS OVER
kool-lo no you didn't...where the hell is elise?
when eva see that bitch she better come correct be damn the cousin factor...or else i'm going to your homw and kick your ass then chain your ass to your computer for a rewrite to have her do so...kool-lo capchie.....don't make me show why i'm still this Queen on this site hefa...kool-lo
Remember i am the original queen of freakiness up in dis here piece don't make me seek you out Sexy Biotch.....lol
loved it my twisted sister...sb....kool-lo
Author's Response: i dunno where elise is? damn right she better. you can't touch me.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – ITS OVER
“You lie there and continue to lie to me and then you play upon my weakened state.”
oh i loved this line , evangeline is so busted. what weakened state i mean yes with all that sex sure i'd be weak to but damn van really has this reverse stuff down. so they have arrested her why? where the hell is elise? what is going to happen to her? oh you make this rebellious van so damn good i love her even more. if they don't cuff her she isn't under arrest. i can't wait for an update
Author's Response: lol yes i love van using rverse psyh onhim. lol tell me about it. i dunno why they arrested her? i don't know i think she skipped the country. yes i was aiming for a rebellious van girl thankyou.
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 - 03:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 – A DANGEROUS GAME.
vittel what happen water wet your bed this morning? lol seems like you and bcg bed were wet. lol.
sexy i love the way this thorpe guy whois john talks. i hear and feel him loud and clear. that was some daymn good loving. i love the ending .
what a way to lay togetehr. its all good girl, now if you could follow up with another chapter like this in OMT then girl i'll be the first reviewing your stories before vittel or bcg could .look at the time them gals posted a review. daymn lol. hey don't forget i need you to help me with my hsc3 papers.
Author's Response: GIRL i know sems like they were waiting in lay for me to post it lol. do you now? good? gald you liked it.
tell me about it. i will soon hang in there. lol i am cool just hit me up on wither of my units yeah.