Reviewer: vittel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 07:28 am Title: CHAPTER 8 – A DANGEROUS GAME.

jordan that was sexy, that was hot, that was mind blowing. now all i have to do is get a man with the skills like thope/john. girl you have me squirming in my chair. and feeling all hot and bothered under my bra. i am at work for godsake couldn't you have warned me properly. thank god for pantyshield or mybrown skirt would be runied. now excuse me i need to go to the bathroom. thank you so much for the update. and the wonderful thoughts you have given me for this morning period. now if only my bf worked where i worked. i'll be OL later chat to you then ok, have something to throw by you.

Author's Response: thank you V. lol. what this hour at work on the net i am telling. i did warn you. lol ok TMI. glad i made your morning cool well ae you going to call me or email me or IM me? doesn''t matter

Reviewer: terri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 7- MOMENT OF CONFRONTATION

ms sexy b, i am so happy that you are keeping up the postings.

my problem is with elise. come on who the hell does she think she is and why is she trying to play evangeline for a fool. she should have slapped her that would have made me feel better even if van would have regretted it later. lol up to her room, now i know they aren't going to be using actual words, no way the bedroom is where you take them to another level and i can't wait. i anticipate the next chapter because i know its going to be popping hot.

Author's Response: yes i know i am keeping in line with my probation officers.. jeez doesn't anyone like elise? ok thats true i will deal with it pronto.. what who says they aren't going to talk? did i tell you they were'n't? do you know something i dont?

Reviewer: Bcg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 7- MOMENT OF CONFRONTATION

Okay where do i start? oh yeah puleeze introduce me to Elise so can beat the trick down for Van...and have Thorpe confess already becuz he aint no Tom Cruise on a mission impossible, becuz John Mac is way cuter. Secondly his voice is no Sean Connery so someone needs to tell him his no 007 either...he's a flat foot plain and simple...or is he? Hummm this puzzles the mind. anywho i won't go into any more rants but liked this chapter not loved ok...come on bring back your A game...we need it. hell i admit it I NEED IT Shit....lol...jules.

Author's Response: what you gonna do to elise? what i am not a tom crise fan don't compare my john to tom cruise. now sean connery i love.. well there yer go then,

Reviewer: terri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: CHAPTER 6 –ONCE, TWICE, THREE TIMES A FOOL

i see you are tryin to trick me again. i know and i figure john is undercover and john is thorpe. and i agree with viteel when she says that elise is using van its a set up.the attraction between those two is undeniable, but i don't want to believe that van is the suspect.if john/thorpe knows more than he is telling could he then be trying to prove she is innocent even though she is supposedly a suspect.i don't think he thinks she knows anything about elise. thorpe/jophn knows more and i hope he tells van what a low slimeball her cousin is straight up. and one more thing when are we going to get a next love scene between those two, that last one had me wetting my appetite for another .

Author's Response: what me? how is that? ok so you figured that much out how is it a trick? maybe, do you know evangeline? yeah well u know i had to throw in a little back stabbing family member.

Reviewer: vittel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: CHAPTER 6 –ONCE, TWICE, THREE TIMES A FOOL

firstly i have to say well done evangeline for standing up to her. no need for elise to talk to her like that after all she was the one that begged her to come and honestly i think its a set up. elise is setting van up to take a fall for her, i just have that gut feeling because i read over from the start again and you did say that the two of them could pass for almost identical twins. it doesn't smell right at all.elise isn't a nice person.
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then she tries to use reverse tactics on van to make her feel sorry or guilty for what? van did nothing wrong except let her cousin mistake her for a fool. now i am imploring you your Bitchyness to see to it that van gets retribution . if its a set up van needs to start cluing in on more things. just like the party and the woman mistaking her for elise. i just know its a set up.

Author's Response: thank you. i had to give evangeline some of her fire back. damn right elise better recognise. how do you figure that? ah i see ok i will say you're right on that.. what ar you saying that van is clueless?

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2007 - 09:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 6 –ONCE, TWICE, THREE TIMES A FOOL

Well the answer is hell to the fucking NOOOOO!!!! ~~~ LMAO!!!!

Gosh darn it!!! You and your cliffhangers! So what is John...FBI, CiA, 007? lol And why is Van considered a suspect? Insurance fraud perhaps?

And Elise....why is someone trying to kill her? I don't trust this Luigio, Lui, Gio, whatever the hell his name is, I don't like him. There's something fishy about that guy.

So its LOVE hunh? Damn right it is and Van needs to stop running from hot sex on a platter who's definitely "sin walking on two legs" (loved that line).

Update soon!

Author's Response: yes you know i have to make van take a stand. ok, hang in a bit and you willknow all . she is a suspect because baby did a bad, bad, bad thing lol. because she messed with evangeline. yeah me neither? what please she didn't get any in so long of course you would think anything.

Reviewer: rangi -san Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2007 - 03:55 am Title: CHAPTER 5 – AFTER THE MASQUARADE

damn i didn't believe my girl when she said this chapter was pretty good. it is and i love the loving being put down on each other, but i think thorpe who i see is john should have told evangeline before he took her to bed.he has been on pointwith what type of person she is, but he forgot hat evangeline evangeline has issues with trust and now he will be like every other typical male she knows . he lies to get into her bed. but i've been reading your other stories when i can and you always seem to make john a winner in the end though he has to work for it.

Author's Response: hey rangi... you do huh? well maybe he will tell her next chapter and then its going to be all good for them. tell terri and vittel i say they talking to much to you, i ain't telling them anything again.

Reviewer: terri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2007 - 03:15 am Title: CHAPTER 5 – AFTER THE MASQUARADE

daymnnnnnnn that was hot, they just go for it huh? i loved it so evangeline and thorpe aka john will they gettogetehr or aorture?re you going to split them up and start your torture

Author's Response: well i am still working on the master plan. wait and see what i do with them. okie