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Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2007 - 05:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 – INVITATION TO AN AUCTION PT2– THE LAST BID

PUHHLLLEEEZZZEEEE don't take forever and a day to update this story. I could've scratched that woman's eyes out for outbidding Van. Not to mention showing up the way she did. And bearing news that he possibly fathered a child whom he had no knowledge of and certainly not that he'd remembered the deed anyway. (If he was impotent, or in his case drunk and couldn't perform, what are the odds that he's the father?) I'm soooo glad Van heard their conversation. At least she KNOWS that John wants her for her, not her money. Cricket and John hadn't spoken since he left CA, therefore, she had no knowledge of Van's wealth. The words spoken between them was all the proof Van needs that the man loves her and only her.

So again I ask you, please update soon; I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: i am trying when i am not busy . well lol if it didn't have a little competition it would all be to easy don't yuh think? well that will be revealed soon. lets hope he isn't. lol yuh getting clues. lol maybe but vans a practical girl she needs more than words

Reviewer: avis11611 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 - 09:24 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 – INVITATION TO AN AUCTION.

I am doing the happy dance and the wave, so happy to see you and the story back, have to read later, cold meds are kicking my but.

Author's Response: lol glad you're at least happy and its a short come back but i will try to update as many chapters as i can. thanks for staying tuned.

Reviewer: i dont kno Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 07:02 am Title: PROLOGUE

waiting on a update

Author's Response: its coming just give me some time

Reviewer: BCg Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 12:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – BELIEVING WHAT YOU SEE!

OK OK OK

Dang it thats it.......SB

I have had just about enough of this...HIgh School back and forth convo....You are enjoying torturing us or What?

You have seccussfully made me hate J & E in this story and right now i am wishing that i didn't luv reading it so much.

I have got a world class headache with all twisted underliner of want you and i dont want..i hate you and i dont hate you..i love you and I dont love you..man now i feel as sick as Johnny Mac.

Curse you for getting me hooked on this story so much that i am willing to sit here and suffer through the pains of my headache and my stomache to read this story because I have to see it through to the end and what the out come maybe for loving each other.

I think in order to get this bad taste out of my mouth that you have left me with i will go re-read my favorite story Blast from the Past.

loved it and hated it with equal passion,
laters M8
jules

Author's Response: sorry but jules u don't have to read it. get a patch it worked for me...lol

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 10:35 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – BELIEVING WHAT YOU SEE!

Now they and we are getting somewhere...lol. I just hope that Evangeline will back down some and John will step up and hell of a lot more, so they can finally be together. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: john doesn't stand a chance and evangeline isn't backing down ...lol thks for reading

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 06:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – BELIEVING WHAT YOU SEE!

Did Van have some tiype of medical traiining too? The way she 'examined' him and questioned his symptoms, one would think that she'd either went to school, worked as an assistant or had experience taking care of people - possibly her brother - or its just plain ole logical deduction. Anyhoo, she loves being a smartass doesn't she? If John doesn't want to know what this man is to her, I sure as hell do. Hopefully he's a friend without privileges. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: lol she has a brother and she has been through a lot with him. and then its a little bit of common sense to. yes she does love being a smartass. lol taht will be revealed soon enough

Reviewer: avis11611 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – BELIEVING WHAT YOU SEE!

Tiger what can I say, Van is keeping the heat on, I am loving this, more please.

Author's Response: all the time she knows what she wants .

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 03:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 – BELIEVING WHAT YOU SEE!

lol you keep on tourting john stop ok lol. Glad you from you vaction and can't wait to see the pics of the trip you went on girl. Thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: thanks me to. though another week would have been great anyways as for pics its minimal can't show you most of em went toplesss lol but i'll see whati can do

Reviewer: BCG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 08:45 am Title: CHAPTER 8 – WHEN AT MERCY’S DOOR

Ok ms. thang,

Sorry it took me so long i was having PC trouble. Now back to this story First offf thank you for finally posting on it. Secondly come on I know John must suffer for his crimes but Dayum can you give my boy a mall break. At least let us see how she is thristing too. You are toruring the mess out of my boy and it doesn't look like he has any hope in the freakin world come is too much to ask to give me just a glimmer of hope that he may actually survive this in the end. And you think i have forgotten about your little game in your other story nope sorry i haven't. But i do have an answer for you on which story i think it came from. ..lol.

be blessed mamita,
jules

Author's Response: ok i am chug the little train to put out another chapter chug harder i am going ....lol

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 – WHEN AT MERCY’S DOOR

These two are insufferable, infuriating, invincible but more importantly they're intrinsic and intoxicating. Can't get enough of them.

Glad you're back Jordanna...you were missed.

Author's Response: ll they are..........yes they are to.....and that to..... just can't get enough..... thanks missed posting and reading here

Reviewer: avis11611 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 10:05 am Title: CHAPTER 8 – WHEN AT MERCY’S DOOR

I love this, thanks for the update, I have miss this, had to reread and have some good laughs, please update soon.

Author's Response: tahnks gald u do. i will once i can

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 – WHEN AT MERCY’S DOOR

Thanks for the updated it been like for ever since you posted or any where heard from you and glad you back you were missed. This story gets crazy and crazy lol still like van teas him. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: welcome....... sorry i had to flee the nest ... craziness i say craziness.

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 – WHEN AT MERCY’S DOOR

Oh this is torture b/c I wish both of them would just drop the meaness and get on with the dirty of their past. It's clear they need to before either one of them can move on and my goodness , I'm ready to slap Evangeline. John has hurt you but damn, you going back and forth hasn't and it won't make you feel better. Gosh! Hank needs to fly a kite in a rain strom and never come back.


Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: lol u think its going to be that easy huh ...lol not where van is concerned. hey it makes her feel beeter seeing him this way lol whats wrong with hank he is the man she is with

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 7 – GETTING IT TOGETHER

About time that we are geting somewhere. I wish both of them would drop the 'titudes but there is still a lot of pain between them.

thanks for the update!

Author's Response: lol a little titudes is needed specially for van . john got work to do. well its there john knows what he did van felt cheated

Reviewer: Shocol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 09:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 5 – THERE IS SOMETHING TO TELL

Very good story, although I don't think I like this version of John and Evangeline. John as a gigolo, just the thought makes me shudder. And to top it all off, he still needs therapy! LOL. And it's painful to see Vangie as a bitter, vengeful woman. But I can't wait until you finish it!

Author's Response: lol why not she is't bitter she is just being mean because she doesn''t want him to know how happy she is that he is back so she can turture his ass one last time ...lol

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