[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 10:21 am Title: CHAPTER 3 KINDNESS/ PITY ? (still thinking about you.)
lol , first i have to shout out my girl vittel. and thisis crazy stuff reading. i love the "big pore in his trousers ' remark and seriously i can't picture john fat i can'tevangeline is seriously looking to hurt john you can hear it in her words. i feel for john but for now i am sticking with the fav girl right now, besides if i didn't vittel would kick my arse is christian going to be joining them soon?
Author's Response: ok so you know them other two who be wrting me like 500 email s a day to update? yeah well i just like to let my mind go sometimes you damn right van ois the girl and she will most likely walk away unscathed.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 04:14 am Title: CHAPTER 3 KINDNESS/ PITY ? (still thinking about you.)
You need to update way more often. One of my most favorite stories.
Author's Response: thanks
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:28 am Title: CHAPTER 3 KINDNESS/ PITY ? (still thinking about you.)
i love the games between the two of them. and this just peek my interest even more to find out who was on the other end? is it hank? or a friend and she was teasing john or was it her brother?
Author's Response: oh yeah i forgot that i think i'll let you guess who it was.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:26 am Title: CHAPTER 3 KINDNESS/ PITY ? (still thinking about you.)
honestly i would like to know whta goes on in your head when you are writing these two duking it out, of course van always walks away with the lat worrd.
Author's Response: lol i used your word duking it out, lol a lot goes on in my head, how you been?
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:24 am Title: CHAPTER 2 WHAT IT WAS WAY BACK
ok it wasn't fair what burns was doing to his family, but on the other hand john should have told evageline something.
Author's Response: maybe he was right in what he did, maybe not the story will tell.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:17 am Title: CHAPTER 2 WHAT IT WAS WAY BACK
now don't we hate them old days, john better have a way to get her back, because an just seeing negative on his part. and will you give the man some peace o mind.
Author's Response: ah well i might supply him with a plan if he stays on my good side.
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 3 KINDNESS/ PITY ? (still thinking about you.)
WOW van is such a teas but understand it. Wonder what john is goin to do the next move on van and find out who was on the phone. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: you know it....
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 - 12:52 am Title: CHAPTER 2 WHAT IT WAS WAY BACK
wow thanks for the update.
Author's Response: welcome thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2007 - 11:07 am Title: CHAPTER 2 WHAT IT WAS WAY BACK
i'm hooked once again B. let's get this story rocking like I know you're going to do.
Author's Response: ahhhh... your biased....lol
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 03:04 am Title: CHAPTER 1 WE NEED TO TALK
don't care about the woman john was with, but seeing the way van and him sparred is funny, john got a fiesty mouth, but i know you and van have something else coming up for him. but i liked this chpter , i can't wait for the next chapter ...please
Author's Response: damn right ... i love having them duke it out, because i know they would pull it of so well and later fall into bed tangled limbs and all... of course you won't get it so easy here but hey who knows ...next chapter or not
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 WE NEED TO TALK
Glad Kit is out of the picture though their relationship is fuzzy anyway. And if it's more than appearances, don't bother to elaborate. He's so in love with her and more than positive she's in love with him too. This is interesting, tell me more...
Author's Response: it was my intention to make it fuzzy... me writing john sleeping with a next woman uh no way u will just have to think the rest up ,i'll plant the seed. read teh rest
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 07:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 WE NEED TO TALK
what the hell. first of thank goodness you got rid of this kit woman, secondly why is john and van so bitter to each other and whats with the crude words? but i love the egg part and nibbles taking a bite out of him , lol thathad me ROTFLMAO
Author's Response: hey i am glad you were on the floor having a laugh as for teh rest read to find out what happened to split them up.
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 06:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 WE NEED TO TALK
Great chapter.Give me more.
Author's Response: cams are you looking for a sappy story, lkovey and gooey, romanace galore and john actually singing?.... then ......................
[Report This]Date: 01/09/2007 - 09:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 WE NEED TO TALK
Dam girl this was intersting van letting him know what going down john a jackass and some what of a sweet heart i hope they find they way back to each to other. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: wwe ... i am not a happy go lucky writer for me teh story is them in angst and this you know need to get at each other ....ok
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2007 - 01:33 pm Title: PROLOGUE
I love this idea here! I can't wait to see how this will unfold between John and Evangeline and I'll bet that Evangeline will give John a real night to remember...I'll be looking forward to reading that...lol. Can't wait for this story to get going...I know you won't disappoint!
Author's Response: well its a working digress so hang in there it gets better i think