[Report This]Date: 02/07/2007 - 01:13 pm Title: Guess whose coming to dinner
I don't even know where to start with this chapter. It was that good! The John and Evangeline love scene off the chain and I love how Evangeline makes John lose his cool. That man is so far gone it's not even funny...lol. But now I'm scared with the Zhengs brothers on the door step. I hope everyone makes it out ok. Nice chiffhanger!
Author's Response: Thanks girl! I love keeping ppl on the edge of their seats.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: Guess whose coming to dinner
OH it on man what going to happen next? john and van was HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT and so was jason and ishra love it you did a great job btween them four and a realy good job of van and john making love for the first time love it love it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I always appreciate your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2007 - 09:15 am Title: Guess whose coming to dinner
This chapter was great! First off, John and Evangeline's passion is off the charts..lol..secondly, there are so many things going on. Jason/Ishara and their underlying feelings for each other..even Cole and Maria. The danger surrounding them now makes for a even more explosive chapter..
Author's Response: What's life without a little drama.....glad you like it. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2007 - 08:17 am Title: Guess whose coming to dinner
Great chapter love the passion between John and Evangeline as alway. Now we getting action in every way LOVE it always wanting more of it. Please let John and gang make it as well Sonny and Maria. Great story more more please.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2007 - 05:42 am Title: Guess whose coming to dinner
oooooow child, things are about to get heated up in there, can't wait for the next chapter. keep that imagination of yours fired up and going, missy. i'm loving this story immensely.
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2007 - 11:33 pm Title: Prologue: Dethroned
Ooooooooooh I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: More is definately on the way. I hope that you find it just as entertaining.
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: Discovery
every chapter keeps gettin betta and betta u gt me hooked on thi story wors than crack lol i cant believe its only now Jason is gettin tha hint jus like sumone i kno
Author's Response: haha....thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2007 - 06:46 am Title: Discovery
It's going down, now! You got me all geeked up for this! And I loved the part when they were in the woods, and Cole was trying to alert them in a subtle manner of his presence--John was like, since when does Cole make so much noise---too funny!
Author's Response: yeah....I thought that was funny too!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 11:10 am Title: Discovery
Thanks for the update. They about to make the move. So Cole know about John and Evangeline. Jason seeing Ishara in whole new light. Okay I ready for action from all angle the loving the capture of princess to killing and finding the princess family whichever come frist I ready . I love the story.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:38 am Title: Discovery
did i tell you how much i love this story.... i really do , so far i have been thrilled and i like teh way you are bringing jovan together , like cole and love ishara. i can't wait for the next chapter you have me not resting easy because i am so anxious for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:20 am Title: Discovery
wow, i am loving this story and your timely updates.
Author's Response: Thank you...glad you like it. I try to best to keep things moving right along with timely updates.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 08:19 am Title: Discovery
interesting....i can't wait for the next update,,so chop chop sweetie get to it....lol
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 02:27 am Title: Discovery
Oh boy! Emotions are running high for everyone, and the Zheng brothers are getting ready to make their move. Uy-oh. I'm sure Sonny has his place secured like a fortress, right?! LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter..
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Discovery
That S.O.B man let the battle begin can't wait to see sony in action kick some ass jason and ishara and john and van mmmmmm. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: Discovery
Oh no! They know where she is and they will come for her. I just hope no one gets hurt during this mess but I know in order to make it a great story, which this is, then some dramatic stuff will happen but I have grown attached to these characters and John and Evangeline were just discovering their feelings for each other. They are almost like two teens discovering that first love....too cute!