[Report This]Date: 06/04/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: New Beginnings
that was such a good chapter. The king needs to get real, no one is left for him to command. He needs to be honest with his family.
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2007 - 04:36 pm Title: New Beginnings
Another great chapter. I want a baby, please!! LOL, seriously no protection, hello! LOL
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2007 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter 29: The showdown end of paradise continued
I just finished reading this story.I gotta be honest.I didn't think it was something that would interest me but my friend Jules talked me into reading it.I was hooked from the start.I can't wait for the next chapter.Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2007 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 29: The showdown end of paradise continued
Yes! Yes! Yes!.....its about time Houdini. I'm sick of you escaping those damns cuffs DAWN, that ankle bracelet didn't work either, and i be damned if that low jack did clash with your outfit but did you have to destroy it? Now i have know way of find your happy behind.
Damn that was some kick ass fighting and i'm glad that the few that were mention and grew to love survived the horrors of the Zheng brothers.
Now onto the Q&A for the Morgan's and some much needed Jovan luv'in. PLEASE with cherries on top!
See i asked nicely this time, no more cuffs for you or chains for now on this story, but i'm still keeping you shackled to Ex Measures DAWN. Chop chop, i'm growing impatient with how slowly you are moving on that one too. lol
Loved it DAWN, PS...I'm still thinking of something that not even you Houdini's Apprentices can get out of...lol.
Laters chica
Jules
Author's Response: I'm a bad girl.....spanking my own hand right now....lol. I have a tremendous amount of things on my plate but I will work on being quicker with the updates Jules. Thanks for hanging in there. Peace and Blessings Girlfriend!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 29: The showdown end of paradise continued
Another great chapter. J/E love them so much.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2007 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 29: The showdown end of paradise continued
OMG OMG this stuff is crazy. I'm happy to many people didn't die and sonny and them got in those evil asses. I love that moment he is wrap around van and sleeping with her. Love the family bond and that she wasn't harm. I can't wait to the confronted king and queen and what is going to happen to layla? is she going with her sister or what. Thanks for the updated girl love this story.
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2007 - 06:42 am Title: The showdown...end of paradise
Damn sorry about all the typos i was typing in a rush, Dawn. but hopefully you can figure it all out. if not email me and i explain with a level head and Jeff stop lurking in behind me bro....lol
Jules
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2007 - 05:28 am Title: The showdown...end of paradise
House arrest my ass!!!!!! Gurlfriend child puleeeze. Pfft.
Bump that I'm on my way right now to the store to get Dawn a low jack so we can GPS her crazy ass. Now tighten up those shackles Ms. BCg.Now I'm positive she won't be pulling any more Houdini's & MIA scenes on us again. Gurl you know i Luved the High Power Action that course trhough this chapter. JEFF gives it two thumbs up.
Lurking the Board Always,
JEFF
Author's Response: Hmmm.....I don't think a low would go with any of my outfits but I'll give it a try......lol. Thanks for the review.
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2007 - 05:21 am Title: The showdown...end of paradise
Dayummmm you know you didn't have make me choke on my ice cream DAWN. Damn that was so fighting going on. I'm glad the crew is alright, but now let's see if you can take it ther...lol...just joking....lol...but it was fun to watch john face it the floor as he saw her limp body in her daddy dicass arms....loved layla thinking that she could be a shero but theres only one shero in this story and thats sour girl right....well any who when i find out which one of you chicas keeps slipping her that key to unchain her from that keyboard Im going to have your heads "off with there heads"...now DAWN I'm not going to cut you any more slack...hahaha this time i got shackles and house arrest locator device thats set to shock your butt everytime you move to far way from that computer and keyboard...so i hope you have a laptop...hahahaha
great job DAWN
update soon
smiles
Jules
Author's Response: Hahaha!!! You are so crazy. Didn't you know I was related to Houdini....lol. Thanks for another great review Jules
Peace
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2007 - 12:50 am Title: The showdown...end of paradise
OMG van is she alright. I'm happy that cole ishra jason and john alright and so as layla and those two s.o.b mom an dad. I hope everyone at sonny house fight and killled each one of the them and sonny is alright. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: The showdown...end of paradise
oooohhhh noooo....not the princess! John is gonna lose it.
Oh man, its some kickass battles going on up in this piece. And the women/females are no joke either. I don't know anything about this Kendall on the stories but I like her in this fic. Kinda hate that she and Jason couldn't work things out but I also like Ishara. Damn!
What was Layla doing? lol I hope Sonny's okay. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love to represent the strong female. On AMC Kendall is a handful, I could write her no differently here. You should check her out some time.
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: The showdown...end of paradise
okay i'm so excited that you updated that i cant' read it right now...at least not until i can settle down with some death by choclate ice cream, a blanket, and get all comfy becuz i know this is going to be a blast...you can count on a review from me real soon chica....
smiles & smooches
jules
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: The showdown...part 2
DAMN THAT WAS SOME GOOD DRAMA AND LOVED THE FIGHTING AND AGEYI IS A VERY SELFISH BASTARD. ANYWHO LOVED IT CHICA...UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN OR YOU WILL NEVER GET THE KEY BACK TO THOSE SHACKLES THAT I HAVE AROUND YOUR WRISTS ATTACHED TO YOUR COMPUTER..LOL....JULES
Author's Response: Hahaha....the shackles are cool...they keep me foucused...lol. Thanks for the review....Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: The showdown...part 2
I love it, I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: The showdown...part 2
Wow!!