[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Journey to the truth
ooooo, child all i have to say is that i'm hook on this story like phonics. need more update soon chica.
Author's Response: So glad that you like. I like your stories on here as well.
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2007 - 12:27 am Title: Journey to the truth
She was sort of protecting them. I feel bad for Kendal. She did get her ass kicked..LOL. Damn..now it's time to find the King. See what they are dealing with. Evangeline may have to sacrifice herself to save them. I'm loving John and Evangeline's closeness.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Journey to the truth
wow that was just action packed. i can't believe that Kendell had the king in the basement that whole time they wer e there! SHe completley deserved that a*s whooping that she got. john isn't pushing van away any more and i am happy about that but there is something deeper going on with john's father and van's father, i can't wait to find out what it is and what the Zhang brothers plans are for the king and van.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:42 pm Title: Journey to the truth
Love the chapter action and little bit of drama all role into one chapter. Keep it coming until next time Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: Journey to the truth
GO ISHARA FOR KICKING HER ASS LOL LOVE IT LOVE IT. John and Evangeline are so in love and cna't wait to see how van is going to get her man and jason and ishara cool too the looks. Thanks your for my birthday wish i love it. I had a bless one and it was cool thanks for asking and thanks for the update.
Author's Response: you're welcome.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Journey to the truth
Ah sookie sookie now! It was on a poppin up in this here piece. Damn, Ishara is a total kick-ass chick and let's not forget the testosterone of the Morgan brothers. Kendall is knee deep in the stinky stuff and something about this whole thing smells just as funky. The plot thckens and I have a front row seat...
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Matters of the heart
WOW was it me or is it hot in here. John and Evangeline are good together and i understand john reason for not doing what she offer but one day is going to be at the right time. Poor jason and i feel a little little little sorry for kendell but she still a bitch. I wonder what going on ishrea mind. Thanks for the update girl i'm glad that you better it seem everyone is sick with sucks. IF you up too it for my birthday gift witch is TOMRROW!!!!! i would like to see another update today or tomrrow.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Matters of the heart
WOW was it me or is it hot in here. John and Evangeline are good together and i understand john reason for not doing what she offer but one day is going to be at the right time. Poor jason and i feel a little little little sorry for kendell but she still a bitch. I wonder what going on ishrea mind. Thanks for the update girl i'm glad that you better it seem everyone is sick with sucks. IF you up too it for my birthday gift witch is TOMRROW!!!!! i would like to see another update today or tomrrow.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: Matters of the heart
Thanks for the update I 'm truly enjoying this story. Love the chapter. I enjoy everyone conversation.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Matters of the heart
Oh man, poor Jason but Kendall is going to be Kendall. I hope he will now see what's been in front of him for years and that's Ishara. John and Evangeline are too much here. I love how she is slowly discovering her growing power over John and how John can't find a good excuse for what he is feelings for her but I'm getting more and more interested in what Eva's father did to the Morgan's. it had to be bad for John to hold this type of angry against Eva's family.
I hope you feel better and thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 - 08:44 pm Title: Matters of the heart
John is too cute...all apprehensive and all. I like that he recognises how special Evangeline is and respects her for it! He's quite the gentleman! They're building a nice friendship.
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
it s been a a long time since the last update which means tha next chapter should be awesome cant wait
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Yeah John....you gonna push her away now? I enjoyed this chapter even the icky Sivudah who got his butt kicked by Ishara - you go girl! Surprisingly, I liked Mainak but who kidnapped Van's family? Loved the impromptu driving lesson. Poor John, he's so gone, the princess has him under her spell. Let's see what happens next...
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:08 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Loved it!! Especially the ending.Your characterisation and dialogue is very realistic; it's easy to identify with the characters. I also like the pace of the story; although i thought John was a lil fresh in this chapter; but poor guy he can't help himself. I hope you continue to explore E's inexperience in the areas of romance and physical intimacy. what are Evan's cultural norms regarding dating/love/?? How would her papa react to the loving she is getting from John??
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2007 - 07:24 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
awww they are falling but i hope that what ever his past holds doesn't hurt his relationship with her that you can already see growing. kendel is in for it when jason and cole goes to see her.