[Report This]Date: 01/23/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Lair of the Serpentine
IN a minute my ass lol i hope that ishra kick kendlle ass please let her do that. I wonder what the lying hefa is going to say to him this time. thanks for the update and love it..
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2007 - 01:49 am Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Wow! Love the ending of this chapter..let's face it, love struck these two..LOL..hmmm so Kendall betrayed Jason? Why? Jason has unexplored feelings for Ishara, Sonny has feelings that he isn't going to do anything about. Quite a triangle! I like it!! Where is the Princess' father?
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2007 - 01:48 am Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Ok I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder who has Evangeline's family and why? Also, what is up between Kendall and Jason...def. understand they have a past but I'm interested to find out more with them. Now..I really loved John and Evangeline in this chapter. I felt the passion between them for real...lol. He is falling for her, he just doesn't know it yet but he will.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:44 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
WOW THAT WAS HOT HOT HOT. Thank GOD they alright and safe thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:43 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Love this story.. This chapter is really nice. I hope she will find out who took her family and while looking for him having John fall deeply in love with her.. Can't wait until the next chapter..
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: Lair of the Serpentine
Thanks for another great chapter I really enjoy this story and each chapter is exciting. As always I just love the passion between John and Evangeline . Now I wondering what kendall is up too. Okay who have Evangeline father/family. Loving Sonny. Thanks for the update and please keep it coming. As always more Jovan as well action.
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:08 pm Title: Left behind
I am always overjoyed when I see that you have updated this tale---it is fast becoming one of my favorites and I thank you for telling it! Keep it up!
Author's Response: I sincerely thank you for this review. I am happy that you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it. Again, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: Left behind
i am still a littl esad that he left her behond because they won't be around each other. but i loved how they already seem connected with each other.
i just love cole, i don't know what but i love him. there is soemthing about him.
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2007 - 10:46 am Title: Left behind
Thanks for the update I really enjoy the chapter. Love the conversation between Evangeline and Sonny also glad to have Sonny in this story and that Sonny and John are friend is a plus. John hear his name in the air oh so sweet sound and Evangeline saying his name in the middle of the night. Ishara admitting her feeling for Jason. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this. I wanted to explore their feelings more because this is both sci-fi and romance....can't have the romance without some feelings...lol. Hope you continue to enjoy this.
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Left behind
I like the developing relationships.Finally some are admitting their feelings at least to themselves. Johnstill hasa way to go...but that creates good dramatic tension.
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Left behind
wow ooo they dreaming about each other and jason i like in red. I wish they just tell how they feel about each other and start the love trian i itching for it wanted it but i wait but i also wanted it soon. Thanks for the update girl.
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2007 - 04:25 am Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
yea chapter six was great still luvin the story cant wait for chapter 7
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
Oh how I love this story. Please Please Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Glad that you are enjoying this. Update is coming....thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
okay for one i want to thank you for updating so fast i just love thins story. john was just mean to her but i think he is starting to see that she isn't so bad. and i was happy that john found her before some one bad did but i kindof wish he hadn't left her behind. cole and maria are just too cute.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
men are so so stupid john and jason NEED TO GET A BRIAN!!!!!! they like you and wanted you men complain they can't find a woman who wants them but one staring right in you face and they blind like a dam bat lol. thanks for the update good thing they found her. update soon i got to know what happpen next.