[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
Oh yes now that what I talking about John liking him I love this character. I love how he just took control then left her in the room. So sweet Evangeline didn't want them to get hurt so she decide to handle thing on her own. Oh this is a good story please keep the chapter coming.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 03:56 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
Jason really does need to see what he does have in front of him with Ishara or Sonny would glad take his spot. I'm glad to see Cole have a good time, seems like a ladies man...lol. John and Evangeline..what can I say really except John needs to realize that his feelings for Evangeline are not the ones he keep telling himself they are but I have a feeling that something else will happen to Eva that will help him realize where Eva stands in his heart.
Thanks for the update so soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
Oh yes lovin it you know JOVANSLUT can't wait but I likin it. I knew Ishara like Jason even Sonny caught that . Cole ladies man we alway need one. Okay give is some more JOVAN.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
You couldn't leave us hanging..great chapter. I like E's fiestyness and John's softer side. They are too cute. Jason and Ishara too pigheaded, they just need to admit their feelings for each other and get on with it. But i like the slow burn with J&E. I'm savouring it all.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 02:19 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre continued
Wow!! Loving it!! Despite his reluctance, John cares for Evangeline deeply. Who is this Maniak? And will Evangeline try to escape again?
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 02:08 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
Oooo this was good! I haven't left previous reviews, but I love this story. I love the premise of it. I love how John is attracted to her, but doesn't want to be. Very sensual! And Ishara and Jason..great story there too! I love how you've incorporated other characters. Sonny, Kendall..can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
well, well, well where did all that heat come from. I did not see it coming so soon. How's John going to explain himself?? What is going to be Eva's reaction has she ever been kissed before??
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
okay loved this cahpter. the story is moving on nicely. IShara and Jason are jsut so cute togther and they need to both see that they are meant to be together just like John and evangeline need to see that they belong together.
the kiss was great but he pushed her away and now i need to know how he is going to react to her. and in turn how she will react.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews you have been giving me. I am glad that you are finding this story enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
I like this. Great job
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
Love it...LOL! John it's called going with the flow buddy...try it sometimes b/c he really needs to let lose and enjoy the feelings he is getting for the beautiful Evangeline. Ishara is a lucky girl. To have the hottie Jason on one side and the smokin' hot deadly dimple Sonny on the other....OH BOY! That's a nice sandwich to be in between. I can't wait to see where everything is going especially with John and Evangeline...go with it Johnny Mac...LOL.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Paraiso Terrestre
Hot dam i knew i knew you can't tease me like that UPDATE SOON!!!!!i wanted to know what happen next is john and van going to get it on and amit there feelings to each other and jason and israh are they going to do the same. please update update soon. thannk for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: One step closer
Okay, you have my attention with this story. I am so glued to my computer waiting for what's going to happen next.
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: One step closer
Love that Kendall is in this story but I don't like the fact that she has a past with Jason b/c I'm digging him and Ishara. I wonder who is the one person that knows about the Arthropods? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Lastly, love this growing attraction between John and Evangeline. It will be interesting to see who will go for it first and who will realize what they are feeling for the other. Can't wait to find out the tie that binds John and John to Evangeline and her family. It must be pretty deep for John to have this level of distrust for Eva.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 06:54 pm Title: One step closer
Just read this story today and I must admit that I'm really digging it. I like Sci-fi, even liked 5th Element...shhhh don't tell anyone. lol Van tickles me checking out "her" man. What does she know about a man being a nice kisser? I'm sure she's a chaste woman but not for long hehehe I like the relationships and personalties of all 5 core characters even ole brooding John and of course I can't wait for J&E to realize their attraction to one another.
You've got my attention girlfirend just like u did before. I'm curious to see how the story unfolds and what's up with the Anthropods....
Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this. The first story was a thrill to write and this one is just as muc one.....don't worry I like the 5th element too....lol
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: One step closer
Let me just say I love Sci-fi and this story is amazing. I love it so much and I look forward to each and every chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.