[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: One step closer
I like Ishara and jason together i think they would be a match just like John and Evangeline. i am just lovign hold evenrything is unfolding. i just don't know where things are headed and i like the mystery of this story...it is like i am going on the adventure along with them. great work.
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:11 pm Title: One step closer
The adventure continues and it is interesting reading. I would like to see the J&E relationship developed a little more. John needs to show some interest in E...if even he calls it temporary insanity afterwards.LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 - 10:20 am Title: One step closer
I hope ishra kick kendall ass agian i don't like her. so van this john is a gentle kisser and john thicks she brave i can't wait to see who kiss who first? LIke i say ishra and jason would be good together. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hahaha.....yeah Kendall can piss a person off....can't she.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:34 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
I love how John and Evangeline are written in this story. I can see that John is still willing to do whatever possible to help out those he loves and Evangeline is willing to do the same but I love the interaction between them so far. Pain in the ass....LOL. I'm going to put that one in the caterogy of "She's pretty". Yeah John...I can really tell he doesn't "like" her...lol. I look forward to see how they will fall of each other b/c I see it coming! Thanks for the update and I hope to see another chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
Dam van is hard head to do what see did and what is john to make that woman to let her go and i think jason and ishra going to hook up. thanks for the update girl.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 08:46 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
yep yep yep dis story iz gettin better and better. i wonder what things the seer is seeing i the future. luv it hurry up nd update
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
I am just fascinated with this story i am loving the direction you have taken with these two characters. I can't want to find out what their futures hold. this is just great, can't wait til the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 05:38 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
I am enjoying this story immensely! Please keep it going!
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:31 pm Title: Into the mouth of evil
Really nice chapter. I like the slow build between John and Eva. Pain in the ass?? Yeah right!! he's liking her already. LOL
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2007 - 02:49 pm Title: Call for help
You really captured Jason's heart and the kindness he has.
Evangeline is getting on my damn nerves. She reminds me of the heroine in a historical romance novel...needless to say I don't read those.
I have a question...what time frame is this story taking place in?
Author's Response: The future, the world is starting over.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: Call for help
wow i am very interested in this. i can't wait to see what happens in this story.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:18 pm Title: Prologue: Dethroned
dis story is wicked so far luv it keep doin ur thing
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 03:40 pm Title: Call for help
I am loving this story but i'm afraid. The last time i said this to a writer she stopped updating. I'm still waiting. But i can't help myself i'm falling for this story. I love that it's a sort of blindsided story. I like that Eva is interacting with the whole family and that the one with whom she is closest is not John. I can't wait to see John fall for her. Loving it! loving It! loving It!!
Author's Response: Aw....I'm sorry to hear that. Well I promise you I will be updating this story regularly. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Call for help
Thanks for the update glad jason is willing to help and john he just met his match in van. I wonder where they going have ishram spooke?. LOve this story.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2007 - 08:10 am Title: Call for help
I like the softening of the John character. Thanks Good job.
Jovan rocks
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