[Report This]Date: 05/14/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: The showdown...part 2
I was waiting for this update and it was well worth it. Damn, how is the gang going to get out of this one? I can't help but be upset at Ageyi for bring this on his people but it's too late to think that. I just hope they make it and get the Zheng brother once and for all!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2007 - 10:17 am Title: The showdown...part 2
Omg I hope sonny and the others in the house is alright this is crazy. Dam that is some nice fighting btween cole jason ishara and of course jovan. that father is starting to get on my nevers your mother you guys are fighting for your life and you wanted to chat now ok. So it john and Lo who going to come out on top. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 - 09:43 am Title: The showdown...part 1
Wow i love this story and i hate to see it end when it does, but until then i'm overwhemled reading it.
Loving it chica...
Jules
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2007 - 10:40 pm Title: The showdown...part 1
Girl...you have me hooked to this story! I'm on the edge of my seat and heartbeating fast. I can't wait for the next chapter but I know I have to wait.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2007 - 09:21 pm Title: The showdown...part 1
I really love this story, I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: The showdown...part 1
Keep going, it's still great. Ahh, J/E; love them.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2007 - 02:10 pm Title: The showdown...part 1
Dam go john go john go. Jason cole and ishra go get and wip som ass in that place love this story so much action in here each chapter thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2007 - 12:06 pm Title: The showdown...part 1
did i tell u how much i love action and drama? evangeline needs to like knock her father the eff out and well teh rest could die coudln't care less. oh well cept for cole and shara and the crew in general.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 - 11:44 am Title: The Mole...part 3
I love this story...hope when this ends that you have another story waiting in your bag of tricks....so loving it...thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks...I do have a couple of things stewing in this brain of mine. I have begin posting Extreme Measures..if you have not already read it, check it out....hope u like it also.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 - 08:52 am Title: The Mole...part 3
Damn......I did NOT see that one coming! The mom did it. Wow I really felt for her though b/c it had to be tough but she should have left well enough alone with that. I'm glad John is going to be there for her but more trouble is to come. I just hope that J&E and the whole gang is strong enough to get through it.
Author's Response: Yeah...mommy was a bad girl there...wasn't she. But love can motivate people to do almost anything....I sorta feel bad for her also.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 - 07:43 am Title: The Mole...part 3
Wow now that was good I love it. So Mom knew about Dad true and love. I'm so happy Cole is well and back strong, never was one woman man love that Cole but he also got the love bite love it. I glad John got to Evangeline but I happy his brakes works. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah.....Cole got the bite. Vangie better be thankful John's a good driver.....lol.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: The Mole...part 3
OMG OMG OMG OMG the mother and he was in love with john and jason mother. that is crazy thank GOD john stop he came in the nick of time but be perpare because trouble behind you. I hope all the survie john van cole jason ishra sonny. I like sonnny and the chick who could read minds the seem to work together. Girl so didn't see that coming thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Haha......hey WWE. I just had to throw a twist in there.....lol. Are you working on anything else?
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: The Mole...part 3
tank god that john stop before that happened it would truly devasted him maybe even into taking his own life...but really at this point in the show i wouldn't think that wouldn't be such a bad thing after all and well damn this two just can't seem to catch a break now can they...niah not justified...i think she does know why she was banished...anywho thanks for the new chapter update...the next one shouldn't take this long now that ive chained you to the computer now get to work...lol.....jules
Author's Response: Haha!.....I should have chained myself to it....lol. Nothing is easy with this story.....what can I say...I like drama....lol. Thanks for the review. I am in the middle of reading your lastest. Loving it so....I will leave a review when I am done.....Peace. Dawn
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: The Mole...part 3
i feel for cole and maria will they have a happy ending? who is going to die for the other? wow ag's and nih got a lot in the closet. so ag's was in love with john mom huh? wow!
Author's Response: Secrets and lies.....secrets and lies....lol. Yeah, they have a lot going on in their marriage. Happy endings?....Hmmm.....who will and who won't.....you'll see. Dawn
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: The Mole...part 3
I love it, I can't wait for more.