[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
Love this story and I see the end coming :-(
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 19
just when it was getting really good, you had to go and stop it. I want more please.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh snap! Its on and poppin up in this piece! We got Uraina who's deadly in her own right but there's nothing more fierce than a mother 'protecting' her young. She may not be mother-of-the-year but she's mama none-the-less. Wonder how Nadia will react when or if mother and daughter reunite? The we've got Enzo the mob boss on the scene. Doesn't look good for Roxy or Remy but then again, who knows where the shots came from. I like the truce, if you can call it that, between Falcon and Van. mmmm I think Falcon has respect for Van and none for Nadia, he just works for her organization. Makes for an interesting read.
“You’re the one who made the mistake”. --- wow, who said that? Nadia or somebody else?
C'mon homie, forget about assignments - nah, I'm just kidding (not really ha ha) - I'm on the edge again!
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
It's on and popping in this chapter! Action and drama and I'm loving it. Waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! There is more action and drama on the way.
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 17
HOT DAMN!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2007 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ah man! Talk about a action suspense thriller? We've got one right here. Dang this is good. I can't believe that crazy nut burned the Buchanan mansion. Loved the way you wrote him watching the fire and talking to himself. Very well written. Van's getting into Falcon's psyche without even trying. That was cool the way that scene played out. She's one tough cookie, smart and by now, a little rank I would think. lol Johnny Mac ain't no joke is he? I loved his reply about who he really was...that was smart on his part...he really doesn't know Dusty. I can't wait for their reunion and the showdown, I know its gonna be of da chain action. Nadia needs to get hers, by any means necessary!
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yeah you go john go get van. Nadia and blair is about to fight like hell. I hope they figuer out what is going on befor it to late. Smart thinking stealing the phone. What is van and john next move. I would like to see john and van have flash back when they found out they going to be parents. Thanks for the updated
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow! This story is getting so good. They're getting close. I so want Nadia to get hers so badly. And how awesome is our girl Evangeline? She's decided that she is going to live, and she's going to kick some ass. Poor Remy, and Gia and Dylan were hot. Talk about passion!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
cant wait for more action, John is getting close. I like Dusty .
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
cant wait for more action, John is getting close. I like Dusty .
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow!! great chapter. i kept checking for this one---this is one of my favorites!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
uuuuurrrrrgggghhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here I am again, hanging on this damn cliff! You like that don't cha?! LOL
Author's Response: Yeah...that's me...just can't help myself....lol. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 15
Ok now that chapter was great but I know the next one is going to off the chain! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time with all that action! Thanks for the update but I'll be waiting for the next chapter...lol!
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2007 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am wondering the same thing about the pier, are they close to Van. More plrase.
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ah Dayum! That was some action for your ass girl. I like Odyssey but dang Dawn u need to update EM with the quickness.
Ok...I get that Roxie is a bubble head but why doesn't she answer Mari's phone? Good grief. lol
My mind's wondering again - what's new right, lol - about this pier they've fallen off of. Could it be the same pier Van tried to valiently escape her captors? Or at least in the same vacinity? Makes ya go mmmmm
Author's Response: Haha! Roxie is a bubble head, isn't she? But I do love her. I'd love to enlighten you on your last thought but...I can't.....in due time.....in due time...lol. Thanks for the review.