[Report This]Date: 07/11/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
What who got van??? Man they mess with the wrong family ok. JOhn is going to hurt them one by one. I'm happy she alive and so is john and can't wait to john started to fight his wife. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2007 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh this is getting good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
He sure will. I'm hoping John gets to the bottom of this quickly. Mikey is hilarious. I think it's going to be tough for John to get rid of him. Loving Dusty and Mari...Mari might now be a target. Hmmm..I hope Gia lets Dylan in..liking them too..
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2007 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 11
great chapter!! looking forward to seeing how much help michael is going to be to john.
[Report This]Date: 07/06/2007 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter 10
Dayum van is missing...John is pissed overwhelmed and hurt....well well let's get this next chapter up and running shall we i'm curious about a few things that i have questions on.....thanks for the update...jules
Author's Response: Hey Jules, As always thanks for the colorful review. When I am going to get some new work from you?
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2007 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Where exactly is Evangeline? And who has her? It must be Nadia or one of her goons. She couldn't have walked away by herself..hmmmm..I'm totally intrigued. I hope John finds out about Nadia soon. I'm ready for her to get hers.
[Report This]Date: 06/29/2007 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 9
didn't see that coming, J/E in a car accident and I know they survive.
Pris
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
So many things going on in this story..I like it.. a lot of intriguing characters..next to John and Evangeline, I'm intrigued by Dusty and Mari, and Gia and Dylan..I hope John and Evangeline are okay..I want Nadia to be exposed ASAP..
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg van and john OMg that bitch got them. thanks for the updated this is crazy.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter; the words just danced across the screen fluidly...loved it. I'm curious as to who and how all the players will show their hand and what diabolical plan Nadia has for my Jovan. (She's working my last nerve btw) Blair and Asa had an affair? Wow! Obviously he's got great stamina for his young phillies. hahaha I hope he gets medical attention before its too late. What's up with this Dylan character? Don't trust him for some weird reason. I like Dusty and Mari's non-relationship love thing though they're fighting the inevitable imo. Glad to see Remy's back; I like him, he's a cool dude. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
thanks for the updated this stuff is getting mor crazy. Dorion is still dorion. Nadi ooooo she crazy I hope every one fiugers out what is going on before to late. I love the family moment between them and would like to see more.
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Who esle the evil nadia wanted dead tonight. John he such a romtica type. thanks for the updated is it bo and blair????
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Who esle the evil nadia wanted dead tonight. John he such a romtica type. thanks for the updated is it bo and blair????
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2007 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow this keeps getting crazy and crazy. Thanks for the updated and cant' wati to see what happen next
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
You know i love my girl Nadia. And i'm glad antonio is dead but does it have to bring my gurl down like that.
I figured that maybe i should chain you to the computer any more, but rather chain my self to your wall...lol
I know you would then get tired of seeing me and write so damn fast that i woul dbe gone in less then a week....lol
It was great Dawn
thanks for the update chica
Jules