
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE THIS, the drama is getting good.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2007 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter. This story is my cup of tea...intrigue, murder, suspense, betrayal, etc. Its intelligently written and has a MI:2/Pelican Brief/The Score type vibe to it. The pace is just right; not too elaborate yet adequately descriptive. The prospect of Nadia and Van squaring off would be interesting to say the least. Also, I like how you've written Evangeline - smart, not easily swayed or gullable. Inviting trouble would've been stupid and Adam is exactly what she nor John need. And speaking of my man John, loved him trusting his instincts. I could go on and on so I'll just end with update soon! Peace.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am enjoying writting this sequel and I am happy to hear that you are enjoying reading it. Peace.
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
What??? girl this story is gettitng better and better ok. Dam something tells me bluter is going to find out what going on. I hope van find out someone is following her and kepping tabs soon. Poor michel. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2007 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter. Nadia. Smith and Falcon are evil. J/E will prevail of course and I can't wait to read how.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2007 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
sorry it took so long to get around to reading this story but as always you delivered and i thank you it was great. update soon chica...jules
Author's Response: No problem...I am just getting around to reading some of the great stories on here as well. As always...thank you for the review...Dawn
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2007 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter 4
OH SEE HERE SWEETIE I HAVE BEEN READING YOUR STORIES HUN FORM THE FIRST ONE YOU POSTED. ITS MY FAVORITE OF THE FOUR BECUZ I LOVE VAN AS BAD BAD GIRL. I JUST HAVEN'T BEEN LEAVING REVIEWS. I NORMALLY JUST LURK THE BOARDS. BUT AFTER MUCH BITCHING OUT BY MS BLACKCUBANGIRL ABOUT SUPPORTING YOU AUTHORS WELL CHILD PULEEZE I COULDN'T AGRUE HER POINT. SO I HAVE SEEN THE ERRORS OF MY WAYS. AND I LOVE HOW THE MYSTREY OF THE UNKNOWN JUST HANGS IN THE AIR IN THIS STORY AND LUVIN THAT NADIA CHICK. WOULD LIKE TO KNOW LITTLE MORE ABOUT THEIR FAMILY LIFE THOUGH. BUT I LOVE THIS STORY TOO.
LURKING THE BOARD
JEFF
Author's Response: Haha! Well I am glad that you are enjoying these stories.
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2007 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter.I'm eagerly awaiting the next.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter 4
wow so there is more to her past? intersing this keeps getting better and better with twist and turns. Guess nadia going to have to worry about this guy too. something tells me he has his own plans. thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 4
see i love this story...and adrian is a real sicko....i'm glad that John made her shut the door...can't wait for the next update...
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 4
the mystery i like.
can't wait to see what happens next. and i know this update isn't going to be anytime soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2007 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the update. Still loving this story, I hate Carlo, but he does make a story interesting.
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Now this is really getting good! I can't wait for more. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2007 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
see nadia is my girl...and i aint sorry about assholio being dead..sorry cams..but he is a rotten father on the show and i can't stand that about him and someone needs to put himin his place about that little fact...enough ranting...i loved this cahpter chica..get to work and the next one please...see i can be nice..lol..jules
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this story.It's almost as good as Once a Thief.Of course I still don't like that you killed off my Tonio but as long as you let Nadia kill the idiot that killed him I'll be happy.Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2007 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
girl you have a divious mind, this characters are sick, more please,
Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you for the compliment.....yeah, I'm twisted, what can I say. Thanks for reading.
Dawn