[Report This]Date: 08/07/2010 - 12:55 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
Lol, I loooooved it!!! If it was a book I would of read it cover to cover! It was great, and I loved how "innocent" she was at the end.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2007 - 11:19 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
Great!!! Sequel perhaps?
Author's Response: already working on it.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 02:11 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
I was about to say...no John didn't leave like that but he didn't and I'm happy for it. This story was off the chain good. Thanks!
Author's Response: Q u know i like to tortur but i always make them cum fukk circle....lol
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 02:03 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
She made him beg for it...gone girl!
Next chapter!
Author's Response: yeah she reminded me of someone lol.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 01:52 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 2 *****
I love how she played him...Van is a naughty girl!
Author's Response: very bad girl she is.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 01:45 am Title: *****CHAPTER 1*****
I love it...lol. On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: they all there girl....
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 01:06 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
oh i am going on a weekend trip like that i gots to have me some of that freak u got going on , dayum i loved it every minute from the club to the recliner and wow can i say best BJ john.
Author's Response: glad you loved it all the way there lol, just make sure u not married if u going for a weekend like taht ok. and well hell u know john gots to give some damn good head to our girl... he a pro.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2007 - 01:03 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
have no mercy i beg you, have no mercy on my senses. this was hell , very hot and boy did i like the way the put it down makes me want to get in my BF grandfather lazy boy chair....shit i just wet myself, girl u making me do the wronng things don't stop it at all. i love teh ending pls say u have a sequel in store?
Author's Response: gone with your badself girl...... u know i don't take mercy except well . try it... i won't watch teh board closely. i might have one.
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
DAM DAM DAM i forgot something and that was one hell of a kiss goodbye. I hope this isn't the end girl better not be the kiss was hot. thankd for the updated.
Author's Response: well what if i told u it was teh end of this one and soon there would be the beginning of another ?lol
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
Love it love it. Oh how I wish you didn't end so soon but hey I love the ended.
Author's Response: i know but hey , it had to end as i was recieving death threats from a certain person.... shhh tehy think i am trying to take her crown, what she don't know is tthat i have taken it.
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 09:04 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
I bow to the queen.That was awesome.So hot I felt it.Great story.I want a sequel.
Author's Response: am working on it cams just wait with me will u?
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:51 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 5*****
That was some DAYUM GOOD H.O.T. SEX on a platter but-er-um, John coming back, theatrically kissing the hell out of her in front of everyone, then giving her all his information was the BEST!
BCG, don't even try it....I'm wore out now!!!
Author's Response: hey i aim to please and if you liked then all the more reason there might be a sequel to it... and of course sex between these two will never be meaningless....
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:02 pm Title: *****CHAPTER 1*****
I love love love it. Van better hope she don't get preggers...Johnny mc seems to have the supersperm
Author's Response: lol no she won't they practice safe sex i just don't mention the condom in details....lol
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 01:18 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
i have to agree with V. just i will be hunting you down with a machete...lol seriously u need to make up for the next chapter , i had a bright pilot burning and now its almost out because u went easy on bcg.why?why? and as for bcg willl u give her something to be afraid of.
Author's Response: pls u can't gang up on me... how u been girl long time no read, hahahai will promise. yeahh u tell her do something to make mr cower...hehehe,nhohoho
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2007 - 01:13 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
very smooth on their parts. secondly why did u take it easy u took some steam out of my sail there. u better make up for it come the next chapter or BCG won't be after u i will with some SHEARS....lol
Author's Response: lord not u to, ok i will try and put back the steam but i waiting for a certain person or people i should say to issue me their warrant....