[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
Ok chica that was a good chapter but not one of your best.No more taking it easy on BCG.I want you to give it to us good next chapter.
Author's Response: i know i went easy on BCG
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
Thanks for the updated the little talk the had how they play it off like nothing happen a few mintues ago was cool men do it so can women.
Author's Response: u know how i do....lol
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
I just read all 4 chapter and boy was it HOT HOT. Now that was a valentine treat for this Jovanslut. And I like how cool John and Evangeline was when they friends introduce them and mention the key and John offer to paid for it too smoith. Love it. Oh you can give us more oh please give us more.
Author's Response: here u go chick one more for the road...lol
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 04:24 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 4*****
this ...didn't even do anything for me SB...you think its me thats lost my touch baby doll i thinks its you who should go for the gusto...if you really want this crown...got to go luv...thanks for the laugh...but i'll be back after these messages....LFJ
Author's Response: see u trying to tempt me to show u my sword, but alli have to say is 'BANKAI'
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2007 - 11:27 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
Damn hot hot hot hot hot. I normanly don't leave reviews, but i like this thing that you and BCG are doing...it livens up the story board. But i think between the two of you, yawl are going to give me and some of us an heart attack. And i'm loving every minute of it.
Author's Response: thanks , but bcg ain't nothing ....she want to compete and she can't...that is my aim afte all i don't know what hers is though.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
DAMN! Is it hot in here or what? LOL! I'm loving these erotic and nasty games they're playing with each other. I can't wait to see how Evangeline is going to top this off. LOL
Author's Response: rosie ....long time.yeah well i like cat and mouse game guysthink they can do it bette but u know women do it best, play these games that is...lol
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
Why stop now?!
My favorite part:
She heard the soft "click" at her door, saw a sliver of light cross the room as the door open and closed.
She was wide awake now, frightened but aroused, as footsteps sounded and a large figure appeared at the foot of the bed.
"You're awake?" he asked in a soft voice.
"Yes."
"Good,"
Author's Response: ok one more chapter 4 u as well...ok
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 01:57 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
thats the way i like it too, damn i can't not take no more off this i want it all, i want it all.
Author's Response: alright one more chapter ok
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 01:50 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 2 *****
ohhh god i could see he grinding on me just thinking of it making me cold sweat... i love it, i love it
Author's Response: take it easy ok, girl don't let ur imagination run away yet hold onto it....lol
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2007 - 01:48 am Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
girl i think i just touched myself.....OOOPS
that was so feaking hooooottttttttttttt i don't think i want another chapter, on the other hand i don't want to cool down just yet so hit me one more time or 50 more times as long as you keep banking the heat thats all i want more heat, more love, more freaking....i'll be right back after iu use the girls room
Author's Response: hey stop that? what u touch urself with? lolmore freaking u will get.wait where u going? why?...hint hint
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
You can't be serious about stopping.This is too hot to stop.You could do at least 20 more chapters.Great job.Oh and the baby oil was a fabulous touch.Next please.
Author's Response: cammies i gotta a story that u'll love all romance and stuff like that and a super happy ending, now don't hurt ur'self reading this story ok.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2007 - 08:31 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
Thank you for this chapter, but did you honestly think i was going to say STOP...come get a GRIP....I told you really haven't scene anything yet...loving it...van is a force to be reckoned with... i love her boldness ...now STOP all this talk about No More or you're goingt o make me go back into the big brains of yours and scream until you get a headache...lol
Author's Response: lol well it didn't seem like u wanted a next one all this talk about it being soft lol
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
Hummm...let's see what should i rip out of this story and write about...umm maybe the oil me down scene naw maybe his cumming like a volcano...well i guess you'll just have to see ...but i think i can get freakier but i just absolutely loved this chapter doll....lol...i'm just going to give you a couple of warm chapters in loving you and a drabble before i give you the real show...just to prepare your mind for how freaky i'm going to get....lol...I seriously hope that you're ride for this ride Ms. SB....J...so bring it chica.
Author's Response: u should take teh whole story i tell u. lol volcano...SERIOUSLY MS BCG where the hell u finding a man that cums like a volcano. well get freaky chick... right warm u mean bedtime stories before i read the first paragraph i am asleep ...hahahah
i was born to ride
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2007 - 08:13 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
First let me say this SCREW VAN JOHN FUCK ME FUCK ME FUCK ME!!!!!!!! now i would like this to go i love it it goes to a higher higher higher level girl and i don't wanted to end yet. I love what you and BCG doing this battle it fun to the fans and the recpect you have for each other so please coutine with it ok. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: anytime wwe, u know how i am , but tell ur pal bcg to step up her game and ms prude
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: ***** CHAPTER 3 *****
Definitely continue! too hot not to continue!!! :)
Author's Response: ok i will