[Report This]Date: 04/10/2007 - 03:16 am Title: The Funeral Part 1
BULL SHIT, MORE BULLSHIT AND EVEN MORE BULL UCKING SHIT. never ever will i believe anything natalie say out of sincere respect whatever she wants to call it. even if the show was to revamp if van stayed and tried to make those two friends hah i'd rather watch and rewatch dru die anyday.the GNAT shouldn't even be there and her family wrong for accepting the dumb ass bitch there as well but they don't mind turning john away. HAH pls. if todd had had his way he would have seen to it she wasn't there and screw layla as well, don't like her sorry ass anyways.
peace. by the way great story.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: The Funeral Part 1
GO JOHN GO JOHN GO JOHN sing for you woman I happy he came so he can say what he has to say. Tood he was telling the truth i hope john finds her. thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: The Funeral Part 1
OMG Natalie actually acted like a mature adult and said nice things about Evangeline.I love that Jerimah(sp) is going to keep her safe until the arsonist is caught.Poor Todd.I loved John singing and I can't wait to see what he has to say.Great chapter.Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: The Funeral Part 1
WOW!! Great job. Can't wait to hear John's words.
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: The Day Before
Layla was rough on John but I understand the sentiment. LOL at Todd being the voice of reason concerning John coming to the funeral. It's weird cause I understand where her family is coming from, not wanting him there - His ILY was a day late and a dollar short- but like Todd said Eva would want him there. Can you tell I would love to see this play out on screen. Especially since Eva is ALIVE :) Looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: The Dream
John's dream/nightmare was interesting. I hate to say it but he deserves to be reminded of everything he destroyed. I stil want JoVan though. LOL But I have always felt John needs to feel the pain that Eva felt. But quick question why was Todd in John's dream? What did it mean that he kissed E's pregnant stomach?
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 03:43 pm Title: Jeremiah
John broke my heart. I can picture him crying, like that. I always wondered if it will take something like this to happen onscreen for John to finally realize what he's lost.
Is Jeremiah friend or foe? Why wouldn't he just call the police... Curious minds want to know.
Author's Response: Jeremiah is definatly a friend...he's doing what he thinks is best for Van right now.
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2007 - 03:37 pm Title: She's Gone
I really like this scenario. Nice start. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2007 - 08:53 pm Title: The Day Before
Poor John. I like the idea of Layla and Todd as a couple. I can't wait for John to realize his lady love is still alive.
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: The Day Before
Hey i know john fuck up realy fuck up but he should be at the funeral or has his own personal one and layla see it and relize he does love her just a thought. Todd and layla mmmmmmm i can see it. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: The Dream
WOW they all had the same dream john you better find her before it to late. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: She's Gone
i so loved this story... and i hope she and jerimiah don't get into anything serious no matter what .
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2007 - 10:27 am Title: The Dream
I love this story but this chapter was an unfair tease.I want more soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2007 - 05:27 am Title: The Dream
NAUGHTY, NAUGHTY, JD...HOW DARE YOU HAVE ME SITTING HERE WAITING WITH "BATED BREATH" AS YOU SAY LIKE SOME BAD VERSION OF "WAITING TO EXHALE"......LOL...DAMMIT I LIKE BREATHING SO QUIT PLAYING AROUND WITH ME...LOL.....GIVE ME MORE AND SOON OR I WILL BE HUNTING YOU DOWN IN YOUR DREAMS...LOL
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2007 - 04:48 pm Title: Jeremiah
damn i sank my teeth in just in time and now slurp...this story is getting juicy....and i need more JD....so stop playing with me and to work on that next chapter....lol....BCG...J