[Report This]Date: 05/09/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: In One Act
Great short. Thank you for giving us this scene.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: In One Act
This was absolutely beautiful! I was almost in tears, until I read the end. It would be so perfect if the last year and a half had all been a horrible nightmare. You are a fantastic writer, and any soap would be completely redeemed with a writer like you on their staff. I know I'd watch!!! And since that hack DH has completely massacred what used to be a fairly well written show, that's no small feat!! Great job. Thanks for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 09:08 am Title: In One Act
Absolutely amazing. I didn't breathe until the end. Wow.
Thanks so much for sharing this.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 - 08:55 am Title: In One Act
Thanks for the story! It's a nice touch to accent the John/Evangeline love story that somehow OLTL was unable or unwilling to tell. This is the relationship that only true John/Evangeline fans saw on our screens.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:01 pm Title: In One Act
Girl that was beautiful! I started crying towards the end but I love the ending. Thanks for the story and I wish DH would play it like this.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2007 - 02:42 pm Title: In One Act
If only it would happen like this..if only..this would be so great!! Losing Evangeline would be John's worst nightmare..I mean completely losing her..
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2007 - 05:02 am Title: In One Act
Oh that was GREAT I Love it.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: In One Act
girl you had me scared but you would make a good head writer. I like it and the line making mermories nice touch.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 08:11 pm Title: In One Act
Ooooooo Marceline! I thought some one was going to be bold enough to "kill" off our fair heroine! But I'm glad that you didn't! I don't think I could have stomach it! Excellent job lady... Look forward to more stories by you.
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[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 05:57 pm Title: In One Act
Loved it ...you had me shed a tear dang it ...i hate when you guys do that...but i loved the ending more then ending on how she was still alive...you hired you can have DH's job the Witch sucks....got to go...peace out...jules
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: In One Act
you're hired. damn why couldn't they do a reality show for an apprentice soap writer. damn you could take it easily.great story.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 03:48 pm Title: In One Act
When I was told to read this, I was curious to see how someone else wanted/hoped (whatever) the coma story to play out when John goes to see E (if he gets to see her). The parts about memories and the photos she took of him on his birthday was like being sucker punched in the gut. I always enjoy reading jovan's memories/conversation being interwoven into the story. it makes that much more heartbroken.
The ending wasn't what i expected. I was hoping she'd die but it was sweet.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: In One Act
OMG you've got me in tears.That was heart wrenching and so beautiful.I need the next chapter soo.But first you need to go take DH's job away from her.Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 - 02:56 pm Title: In One Act
Oh Marcie....you got me on this one girl. Got a sista all choked up; a tear maybe two fell from my eyeballs but I'm feeling much better "starting right now". (loved that)