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Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Darkness

That woman is crazy as heck! Gosh I wish someone will just put her and US out of misery and kill her and a that slimeball! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2007 - 07:44 pm Title: Darkness

That crazy that she killed frank and happy len got away from them thankd for the updated. Can't see what happpen next.

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2007 - 11:23 am Title: Dangerous Games

OMG! I hope it's Maya under that sheet but I doubt it. So much drama in this story got me on the edge o my seat. I hope to see an update soon.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 - 01:12 am Title: Dangerous Games

I'm gald van and john talked and they working together to stop that crazy bitch maya and brian down. I hope lena gets away and it was nice to see a soft side to patrick. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 07:10 pm Title: The Concert- Pt. II

I hope matin be alright. Brian is one sick son of a bitch. Mya need to get some dam help too. Thanks for the updated

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and staying with the story. Brian and Maya are crazy!! Don't worry. They'll get what's coming to them.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 07:08 pm Title: The Concert - Pt. I

I can't belive it she going to have his baby dam I hope john catch that bastard patrick before it too late. Thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: Trouble Sleeping

Think I'll go pop some corn and setle into bed to finish this...I'm loving it!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving the story. There's a lot of stuff happening, but I promise it'll all be untwisted and revealed soon. Thanks for reviewing, Pari!

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 03:43 pm Title: The Assigment

I'm loving this so far.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: The Plan

I so hope that lena able to get away and Brian is taken down hard and fast. Thanks for the updated.

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Date: 09/25/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: All About John

So lena there? what do she wanted? ooo this is gettting better and better. For a mintue I think I know what is going on and bam another twist.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Relizations

this stuff is crazy. I'm glad that van seen that crazy bitch true side and fired her ass. I 'm glad she belive him thanks for the updated

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 05:59 pm Title: The Set-Up

Maya is a crazy bitch ok and I hope van kick her ass. Thanks for the updated.

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Date: 08/31/2007 - 05:18 pm Title: Revealed!

OMg that bastard I knew I knew he had something to do with it . wow they are so cute together I love it. Thanks for the updated and maya need to get slap.

Reviewer: Sweetgirl83 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:24 am Title: Fire & Ice

I can't believe it has taken me this long to read this wonderful tale...lol. but damn, who is behind this and why are they after John? Who knows but this is good web to get through and I can't wait until you post another chapter of this story. Plz hurry!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 05:01 pm Title: Fire & Ice

I think I know who it is. So this guy is realy after john this is crazy thanks for the updated.

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