[Report This]Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Conversations
What the hell jackass doing there? Well gald van didn't end it and they going to be together. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2007 - 03:11 pm Title: The Assigment
I hope he kicks dude ass i wanted to kick his ass. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:58 am Title: Mystery
Good work layla she need to go work for the cops. So who did the set up? I think I know. Calm down johnny boy lol it will happen. Thanks for the updated and stop teasing us lol. I"M thinking ok they about to make love and have to wait for another chapter lol but i can wait for it. Thanks for writting this story.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:49 am Title: Scandals
I hope she tells john the truth and don't give him up. Patrick is a hoe and he need to keep it in the pants. I cant' wait to he goes down. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:47 am Title: Come Away With Me
Nice touch very nice touch. I like that song you pick for this chapter. They so cute together holding each other sweet. thanks for the updated
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:45 am Title: Here Comes Trouble
oooo Frank you going down down down. I'm so happy the looked at the tapes smart move. Van is gong to cook aww that sweet. He like a little kid when he talked on the phone with her. I can't to see what happens on the dinner date. Thanks for the updated and writting this story.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:41 am Title: Holding on With Both Hands
What you mean the girl partick messing with tape van this is getting crazy. Maya got some problems and she need help. I love the lunch dated untlil crazy showed up. I love these tender moments btween john and van. Thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:33 am Title: Star Bright
Patrick is getting on my nerves all was naging like a kid. I can't wait to she ends thing wiht him hopefully she can hit him in the balls. Also maya stay out of it she not a hoe like you. Aww john to cute laying out his clothes so he looked nice for van. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2007 - 12:53 pm Title: Love at First Sight?
awww they to cute so nevers around each other. I loving this story and maya need to be quiet she getting on my nevers. thanks for the updated
[Report This]Date: 07/04/2007 - 10:10 pm Title: Love at First Sight?
They to dam cute how nerves they were each other. Yeah they were feeling each other bye bye sonny boy john in town and going to get van. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/04/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Trouble Sleeping
Patrick is a ass and I hope van see right thu his fake wanted be actor ass. Maya why don't you marry his ass lol. I can't wait to read when van and john see each other. thanks for the updated and love this story.
[Report This]Date: 07/04/2007 - 04:56 pm Title: Love at First Sight?
Thanks for updating, great read between the food fest & waiting for the fireworks to begin! Nicely different take on both John & Evangeline, I'm interested to see where you take them on this ride.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: The Assigment
Great start! I'm hope that Evangeline feels the same connection that John is right here and I think she will. I'm looking forward to an update.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2007 - 06:14 pm Title: The Assigment
Great start. I can't wait to see what happens when these two meet!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: The Assigment
i'm loving this you have talent please continue to keep on going chica by all means.
can't wait until i read the next chapter.
jules