[Report This]Date: 09/02/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Van's father is a cold-hearted SOB. Maria sensing the shifter in Adam was cool. The scene with Enexhi and Azim was bittersweet. Who knew she'd become a character I'd root for? oooo Kel and Jace knocking boots?! naughty naughty lol Layla's got a boyfriend...you go girl. I enjoyed they're talk and the little rock thing was cute. Okay, I'm ready for Van to find her man, they've been apart long enough. (A bath and a toothbrush wouldn't hurt either-lol) Thanks for the chapter; it was a nice read.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
You know you got me hooked on this tale...lol. I hope Evangeline and co will catch up to John and Jason b/c it will only get more and more dangerous for them and it's better if their are all together than apart. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2007 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter. I like Cole with a child he doesn't know about, but how is this going to affect Maria? Please let Eva, and the others catch up with J & J.
Author's Response: Thank you. There are going to a lot of things that affect a lot of people. Question is...how will each of them handle it?
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
OK FIRST OFF SORRY DAWN.....THAT IT HAS TAKING ME SO LONG TO READ AND CATCH UP ON BOARD......
NOW ON TO MY REVIEW.....HEHEHEHE
DAYUM YOU GOT SOME EXPLAINING TO DO LUCY ! !
DAYUM NO YOU DIDN'T ! !
DAYUM DAWN ! ! !
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Cole has a son, dang it i just dont know what to say about that.....
Kill the Angeyi please cuz i am sick of him and his stupid royal trash....he hasn't learned his lesson yet....i mean by daggone what is it going to take for him to figure this shit out....
Kendall's dad is a live are you shiting me?!
I hope he can give them some peace...actually no i dont i hope he has no information for them and the saga continues to pick up...
i know it will cuz hell you writing it and i luv reading your work....
Quit making me wait so long you know what is does to me....this time i thinking no chains but maybe electro shock theropay.....just think your hair could look like edward scissors hands when i done or like serious blacks cousin; that derange chick....lol
Get to work luv....no more playing around and good luck with this semester luv....Get that school on too....
laters J
Author's Response: Haha! You keep me laughing. Thanks for the review. I did say that there would be several life changing events in this sequal. Is Kendall's dad alive?
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ageyi's glutton for punishment astounds me...when weill he learn. I think Kane still has a thing for Ishara. Cole's a father! What will he do once he learn about Adam? The moment I think I've got a grip on what's happening and what went down so long ago, more plot twists take me in another direction.
Author's Response: Some people never learn...will he? The past was buried underneath layers and layers of lies that need to be peeled away. As the drama unfolds, all will become clear. Thanks for sticking with it and the review.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2007 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg omg cole has a son a son . First john and jason mom is royatly then daddy alive and now cole was in a gand and has a son WOW. ooo I hope one of the girls see the little boy and know. This is getting good. Can't wait to the next updated. Thank you for the updated and why don't you write authors notes dont' like them lol j/k.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the update and of course I am enjoying this story as well.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am looking forward to the next chapter of the story
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Dam ren I"m sorry but you need to let go maria is his wow I hope they be ok and to the next stop can't wait to see what happens. This is getting crazy and crazy.thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2007 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mainak seems to be on too many lists. Why are folk hating on him? lol I like Mainak. Sivana is another story, Sael should put her across his knee. Enexhi hs really changed, I liked how she stood up to her father. Layla is more brave than she realizes. Oh man, Ren has it bad for Cole doesn't she. Makes u wonder if Cole 'left' something with her. Like i've said before, I might be in the minority but I like Kendall; she's a badass, ride-or-die chick. And even though Ishara is my girl, never felt the connection between her and Jason like there is between Jason and Kendall. Xavier's wicked, evil, don't like him. Be careful what u wish for Lilith, it might be your pops demise u witness. I think I've covered everybody. Amazing really, since I'm bad with names and these character names are out there girl. lol
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2007 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
This keeps getting better and better with each chapter in this wonderful saga. Cole's past, the convo between Jason, John and Kendall, just everything is so good. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought it was about time the readers got to learn a little more about my boy Cole. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2007 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter 2
ok ok enough with the cliffhanger ending chapters. my heart can't take much more. i got to know what the heck is gang that cole is in. why did he leave, why hadn't he spoke of it. who is the cole?
you have done well cuz my mind is still chomping away at the bits as to what all the possibe scenerios. you got me. ok you got me hook line and sinker waiting on your every word and seconds for the next chapter up.
i like i am in the movie little shop of horrors with the need to say FEED ME SIMORE. ok like i know the moive is accient but hey it was good comdey so what can i say.
loving so loving the excellent way you have continued right where the last saga ended. Cheers to another outstanding chapter.
now please dont make break out the chains and whips and put on my Kathi Lee mask again to get moving faster. now i am off to read your other story later on...luving it Dawn.
later days,
jules
ps. yes i have been working one or two drabbles but nothing more right now, so wish me luck but dont hold your breath cuz it driving me crazy right now.
Author's Response: Hahaha. As always, love your review. A Little Shop of Horrors is one of my all time favorite corny movies. Thank you so much for reading and good luck with the writing. I can't wait to see what that minds of yours comes up with.
Dawn
[Report This]Date: 07/19/2007 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2
great story! you rock!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love it, I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is getting really good. I can't wait to find out what connection Cole has with this gang and what he did in his past. Thanks for the update!