
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2008 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, about sums it up.
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: Prologue
This story leaves me breathless. Great Job!!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is so amazing, I love it! Pari you did a fantastic job can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2008 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love that John came clean and that Layla had her sister back.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2008 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Love the conversation between John Lisa and Layla. Oh I like how John handle that with Evangeline still my her feel wonderful and still saying you are beautiful. and he going be with ever step. Love it Love. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2008 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved the chapter is was so JoVan, loved the talk between them and the comforting of Van by John classic JoVan. Am I the only one who was reminded of the "There you are" scenes when John comes home and gets in bed with Van *sighs* love JoVan. Glad your back to writing Pari looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2008 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 2
You really shouldn't keep something like this from us, its just not fair. The whole chapter was so them. And oh the scene where he told her the truth....vintage Jovan. Fabulous!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Glad van is coming home and john there every step with her. I wonder if john going to fight to get van back thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel so bad for Van can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:25 pm Title: Prologue
Can't wait to see what John does now Welcom back
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2008 - 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
How sad Eva is all happy thinking her life is normal, then has to hear such sad news can't wait to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2008 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Curious to see Evangeline reaction when Lisa or if Lisa tell her the truth. As always I love your story you always show the magic passion and love between John and Evangeline no matter they together or seprate you alway keep them connected. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2008 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh PARI!!!! You can't leave us hanging like that!!! And there's no telling when you'll update again. Ok, ok, I know I'm an ungrateful hefa but damn girl, can you blame me?! *smiles*
Loved it when Van said she was kissing her boyfriend and that they weren't making babies....which they should be. LOL
Thanks for the chapter, please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see a updated on this story. So van lost two years of her life wow. I like how john hold van and kiss her to sister came in. I understand why john doesn't wanted to keep up with the lie but he need to or in time tell her the truth. thanks for the updated.
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2008 - 10:49 pm Title: Prologue
Pari, so happy you are back and with another great story. Love the first chapter once again glad to see your return.