Date: 10/30/2013 - 04:21 pm Title: Chp. 1
Ummm... Ms.Pari I know iit's 6 yrs later and I've just read this story for the 50th time....however can a sistah get and update or a epilogue lmbo ....please and thx u
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2013 - 01:06 pm Title: Chp. 14
Man oh man I wish there was more to this. Great story.
[Report This]Date: 10/21/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Chp. 14
Pari, I haven't been around and when I decide to do visit and I seen one of my favorite story was update you can image how exciting I am. I love it thanks so much for the update and what a cliffhanger love it.
[Report This]Date: 09/19/2007 - 12:23 pm Title: Chp. 14
Great cliff hanger and I am so happy I can't express myself that you are continuing this story. Now can I hope you finish Lanview High(?) I think that is the name of the other story.
Author's Response: I think you have me confused with another author. I have never written any story with Jovan in high school :)
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: Chp. 14
whats taking so long
Author's Response: You must be new, otherwise you wouldn't ask such a question. Being that its been over a year to get this update...LOL :D
[Report This]Date: 09/15/2007 - 07:18 am Title: Chp. 14
Thanks for updating..Wow you really left us with a cliffhanger..Don't just stop with one shot Eva, turn him into swiss cheese, Blast him full of holes. I'll be looking out for the next update. :)
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Chp. 14
OMg what what is that bastard dead?? YOu go van kill that S.O.B I hope john get there to cut it off. thanks for the updated girl. updated soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2007 - 09:02 pm Title: Chp. 14
Ah dayum! That's way too short Pari, but dayum intense and suspenseful!! I hope that SOB suffers; I know that's horrible to say but karma's a biotch! If Van shot him, then Ii know exactly where she aimed.
Thanks for the update. Can we have another? Soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2007 - 07:51 pm Title: Chp. 14
you ain't playing around are you?? great update---wish we could stick lit matches up jimmy arse----but a gun works just as well!!
Author's Response: *Chokes on her dew* Damn!! Lit matches...that's crucial :D Glad you are enjoying the story...seems like I may just finish this story soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Chp. 13
That batard did it agian ooo please let john catch them I wanted him to die slowly. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Yeah he's a right bastard and he's struck again and ill do so 'again', but he'll get what's coming to him ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chp. 13
Love this chapter and I am ready for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 06:33 pm Title: Chp. 13
The attention to detail in regards to the therapy session was excellent. My favorite part was J&E of course. I love how he is with her. I hope she does exactly what John says and remain at the station until he returns.
I'm boiling mad now. That bastard needs to pay, slowly and painfully.
So Pari, can we expect another update by this weekend? I know I'm greedy but dang girl, its been a minute!
Author's Response: Yeah since I have the idea for the next chapter in my head, you might just get another chappy very soon :) Glad you liked it and thnx for the feedback :)
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 05:18 pm Title: Chp. 13
thank you so much! great chapter, i didn't mean to bother you before. i understand that life gets in the way. i was just being selfish. once again, thank you!!!
Author's Response: Hey its no bother, I'm sorry for making ya'll wait so long for it. :)