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Date: 07/23/2012 - 02:20 pm Title: Respite

WIll there ever be more? This story is amazing.

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 02:07 pm Title: Who Can I Turn To?

They are so perfect.

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 01:15 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

Another wonderful conversation. This is how it should have been...house-sitting hell and all!

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 12:35 pm Title: Those Troublesome Three Words

Wonderful conversation...Jovan rules!

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 12:10 pm Title: Miss You, Miss You, Miss You

Heeeeyyy now.... Jovan login!!!

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 11:28 am Title: "Help Me Know My Name"

Damn water leak broke the moment!

Reviewer: Pris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Respite

Another great chapter thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Oui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Respite

OK...you're freaking me out with all of this Tammy Wynette business....but I'm rolling with it, LOL. I love your interpretation of the McBabe's brothers relationship with their Mom. Fresh!

Author's Response: Hey Oui, Van's going for a different tactic this time around rather then cutting & running. She's sticking for the long haul which will just NEVER be simple for very long with Johnny Mac, it'll always have that touch of C&W refrain underneath, lol!

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 07:43 pm Title: Respite

For someone who's not good with the words, he damn sure expressed himself explicitly in that first paragraph. To which Van's response was allowing him to 'express' himself further.

I love their relationship in this story: not too google-eyed, independent yet totally dependent upon each other's love. I really enjoy 'watching' them 'live' as they should on screen.

This has always been one of my fav stories, many thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Hey, he said he was working on the expressing and talking things if she'd give him another chance. On screen he also said he didn't think wanting to make love was a bad thing. He did, she did, works for them, lol!

Reviewer: Cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 03:49 pm Title: Respite

You're the McBabe Brothers and we're your women.I love that line.This is such a great story.I can't wait for the next update.Update soon.I'm dying to hear what Eve has to say to the Dynamic Duo.

Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 02:44 pm Title: Respite

Marcie and Van on the case!!! YAY!!!! Marcie is so under utilized on OL! They would make a great team - going undercover, solving all the Llanview mysteries!

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 01:36 pm Title: Respite

Thanks for the update on this great story. I love Marcie and Evangeline's scenes and seeing their bond along with the McBain boys but I wonder what Eve knows and doesn't know and how that will effect everyone. Again great chapter and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bcg Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 08:45 am Title: Respite

Ok i am so like grinning from ear to ear as i read this with nothing but silence around to focus only my thoughts on this chapter.

I luv the whol satinding by my man as it is, statement. something thta i personally wished that she had done and maybe jovan would still be shining brightly on my tv screen. curse michael malone for getting fired or quiting or what ever for starting such a wonderful story with these two beautiful characters. then my heart wouldn't be longing to still see them on my screen,

you have created another wonderful chapter, thanks.
waiting patiently for the next chapter,
jules

ps. i tried toleave a review on taras but i can't figure that thing out so kudos to all the chapters over there i luved them too.

Reviewer: Rosanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 - 06:22 pm Title: Respite

The McBabe bros....I love it!! I love that Marcie and Van are so close and are willing to see this through. I too am curious to see what Eve knows and/or remembers..John and Van, as usual, were wonderful in their domestic bliss.

Author's Response: Yeah, I hate that Van & Marcie stopped interacting much and growing close. Different people but they were bonded thru the brothers and more. Another OL missed opportunity! Sigh. And who knows what, if anything Eve remembers when pushed, lol! As always, thanks for reading & responding, girlie.

Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 10:10 am Title: Who Can I Turn To?

YAY! For another excellent chapter. These two know each other so well. I loved how Evangeline knew just what to do. Of course she would. They are soulmates! Thanks for updating.

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