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Reviewer: Quita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

Yes this is the start of the beautiful love story between John and Evangeline! I love how both of them opened up during this chapter and how much of their current relationship woos are old wounds for both of them. Van still upset b/c John left her hanging with the ILYs and John still bitter about her leaving him after all that time. I'm glad they clear the air and I'm looking forward to where they will go from here.

Thanks for the update and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Pris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:33 am Title: Emotional Freefall

Daphne,
I love this story and you are doing an amazing job with it. Thanks for taking the time to update.

Happy New Year

Pris

Reviewer: bcktolife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 11:25 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

Boo freakin hoo!!!! Why o why wasn't the chapter, or this whole story for that matter, on OLTL the way it should've been? The dialogue was realistically written and true to both characters. Let's turn back the hands of time, kick Dena's sorry ass to the curb, then press play and watch Entangled on screen shall we? Yes, thank you, much better! *smiling*

Reviewer: oltlfantimes10 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

I do love this story Daphne, I do! I'm glad you are continuing it, and I hope to read much more of this story in the next year! They are so honest and the dialogue is fantablous, if only.... I won't even say it! I love how you don't mention "her" name, just as it should be! wink* wink*

Author's Response: Yeah Bradley have to stick with this story. I was going to wrap this up faster and in a different way but since the show rewrote history for over a year I'm feeling the need to make the story come correct that tiic refused to show & tell! It's Daphne's world!

Reviewer: Cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

I loved this chapter.The emotions that they should to each other was just beautiful.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rosanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Emotional Freefall

I love that they were able to communicate in this chapter. A lot of things needed to be said, so that they are on the same page. I especially love that Evangeline is going to help him solve his dad's murder. The way it should have been all along.

Author's Response: Yeah, Rosanna, Van & Michael will help John, family. No outsiders needed!

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