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Date: 04/19/2007 - 07:17 pm Title: Mike is having a party

ok a party first night in town for abi. great. but something smells off here. so far you have a knack for making john show up at the unexpected moments. i don't want him to kill mikey. please don't let him walk in on one of their heart to heart moments. he has to understand that evangeline and mike share a loss. they are both still reeling from their lost.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Abi arrives at last!

definitely sounds like its going to be a really hot summer. i can't wait to se how the ladies kick it off.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 06:52 pm Title: NO MORE

hahahaha, i love your little rhymes.. i seriously thought we would have had a chick fight, but van being the much bigger woman took the high road and natalie better listen. john was smart to stand aside and let them settle it. can i just say this van seems like a totally different woman.don't take no shhhhh.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: Evangeline lives

oh payback is getting sweeter by the chapters. but how long are you going to make john suffer? lol how'd you picture that scene in your head of natalie in the club an guysdissing her like that? its to dayum funny.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:56 pm Title: FAMILY MATTERS

hahahaha.... you area real drama queen. thats just how van and he sister behave towards each other on the show , and i loved when margeret said 'don't you want to feel your baby kicking." i loved it. lol hahahahaha

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:45 pm Title: Evangeline helps a friend in need.

oh that was sweet. john busting in that moment and making more of what we know happened. i loved it. first you take the man balls away and then you give him them back and then you let van grind her heels on them. ouch the man is hurting hurting i tell you. and this abi sounds like what van needs. a change of scenary and friends. what happened to her and nora?

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Nora/Mike/marcie

glad for nora and if i tell you i liked that marcie and mikey broke up. i mean i just don't really like them together not even on the show because marcie is to timid and i would really like to see a bad girl side to her.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:21 pm Title: john Questions why he is risking it all.

hmmmmmmmmm. ah...hmmmmmmmmmm.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:16 pm Title: Please i need to talk to YOU.

that was a damn earful and most certainly embarassing. did she have to insult him so? hell yes. i laughed at the reference to batman girl you damn funny to yes. damn funny.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:40 pm Title: NATALIE IS KIDNAPPED

so it was that bad huh? john didn't say bye, or anything? he just dash a fire. well i certainly don't like the character natalie so whatever she gets she deserves.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:34 pm Title: THE END

this is what terri and vit was talking about you romance and woo the reader then you just yank the rug out from under them. lord what am i about to walk into . i can't wait to find out

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:30 pm Title: one for the movies

i bet they can't tell you what the movie was about. you're so bad for writing love in the cinema. i love it.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:08 pm Title: the movies continued

i have never done it in a cinema, and this makes me want to try it just once. ok i need more of this, onto the next chapter

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 01:58 pm Title: the movies

that was awfully wicked of john and naughty of van. god i love the teasing between these two. no wonder they are a dynamic couple for watching.

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Date: 04/19/2007 - 01:52 pm Title: John's pov continued

wait wait wait a minute they been loving like crazy and only now had that indepth talk? lol still i enjoyed their banter and stories. so cute.

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