[Report This]Date: 04/19/2007 - 10:45 am Title: john's POV
re affirming why she loves him, damn if oltl could bring them back together they should have her tell him something like this. why she loved him the way she did and still does.,
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2007 - 10:38 am Title: punishment continued
thisis it honestly speaking no matter what other story i read of your's i don' think the love scenes will compare to these. dayum girl i like the way you write it, so vivid, so clear i need not put much into my imagination to conjure up the picture.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2007 - 10:34 am Title: PUNISHMENT
does this story get any hotter? dayum even i am against the ropes.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 11:18 am Title: more fun
I tell you john and his daddy demons were really pising me off back then...lol...natalie still hasn't caught so much as clue into who the really johnny mac is...and never will....i hopefully, fingers crossed....lool
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 11:13 am Title: THE FUN IS JUST BEGINNING
see this slast paragraph is what got me hook on this dang gon story in the first place...
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 11:03 am Title: inventing
i told you i would start leaveing reviews for this story all over again so get ready chica....lol....jules
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 10:33 am Title: COVER BLOWN
oh lord girl what the hell have you and terri and vittel gottem me into. this is to hot , so hot i want to go get laid up right now. this is much better than a visual picture. the words girl, the words are so freaking hot dayum. as for van playing john like that well in a way he deserved it and not, he was just trying to make it a memorable one for her and he had succeedded but he had to as she say go spoil the mood. i hope she doesn't make him feel to bad than she has right now..
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 10:23 am Title: Birthday surprises continued 3
oh my god that was so hot, sizzling is the word. this oh my god was to hot, i was blushing , i thought they would have gotten caught and john, well he deserved what he got but am i glad they are taking this home. you're mind works mysteriouslyto create these very vivid scenes
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 10:14 am Title: birthday surprises continued 2
lol , lol, lol, by far this is the best chapter, i couldn't stop laughing and , i can only imagine what is happening to her. john has been a very bad bad boy. lol , lol, lol he better not make her cum on herself in front the waiter.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 10:06 am Title: Birthday surprises continued
wtf just happened there? i thought they were going out what the f just happened there? and what a way to end it. you're a real cliff hanger teaser.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 09:58 am Title: HERE COMES THE REAL SURPRISES
is this the calm before the storm? is he going to choose today to tell her about the secret ? he better not. but its good to see he put thought into making her birthday special.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 - 09:53 am Title: AND IT DON'T STOP
i loved evangeline telling her man that she loved him because of him and noth because of material things. she isn't asking him for the world, she is just asking him to share himself with her.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 12:41 pm Title: AND the treats continue
i just wet my panties reading this chapter its getting hotter and hotter
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 12:29 pm Title: birthday treats continued
pant, pant, pant a clit massage.wow
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 - 12:22 pm Title: PARTY STARTED 2
pant, pant, pant, pant, pant do you write sex professinally? lol if my bf answered my phone like that my mom would have a fit.