Date: 05-27-07 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
Oh no! Victor knows where she lives. He's going to kill her! Logan should have stayed the night or something. omg!
Date: 05-16-07 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
Don't leave her Logan...geez.
Date: 05-16-07 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
oh noes. logan don't leave her alone in the-!
Date: 05-16-07 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
GAH! Logan, GO BACK! GO BACK!!! FOR THE LOVE OF PETE, GO BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...so did I say this was an excellent chapter??? I love Vic's thoughts on their relationship and that building, gut-clenching knowledge you immediately get that things are gonna get much, much worse for our favorite couple.
This reminds me a bit of Christian Slater and Patricia Arquette in "True Romance." Lots of recklessness and tension. I'm glad this is in my favorites.
Date: 05-16-07 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
can't speak.. . . crying. very good end to a well-written chapter. please keep updating.
Date: 05-16-07 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
MORE, MORE, I NEED MORE! This story so ROCKS and I can't wait to read the next chapter. AUUUUURGH HE LEFT HER and Victor is THERE!
(breathe, breathe) Write quickly please, Note the "Please" part.
Hugs.
Rolletti
Date: 05-16-07 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Do not leave us hanging like that :O UPDATE PLEASE!!
Date: 05-16-07 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
Argh! Victor saw them together! Argh! Victor knows where she is! Argh argh argh! Cliffhanger!