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| Anonymous | 01/14/2013 - 07:25 am | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
| I am just letting you know that a story on fanfiction net for person of Interest called Impersonating Trouble almost reads word for the word the story that is written here. If you are the author sorry to bother you, if not I just wanted to let you to know |
| Quita | 05/07/2007 - 02:56 am | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
John got his ideal woman! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: its what he was after all along. |
| Pris | 05/06/2007 - 08:51 pm | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
Thank you it was a wonderful story and a great ending. Please do a short sequel and update.
Pris
Author's Response: sequel!!!!!!!!!!! |
| terri | 05/06/2007 - 08:39 pm | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
i absolutely loved this story and the ending is wonderful. a true romance. reading such an ending makes me feel tingly. it'd be really wonderful if they would try again with jovan onscreen, and maybe they can try some of this, i know jovan can make me believe in a story like this. loved it and i can't wait for you to continue on the next. thank you
Author's Response: thanks, see i made you a happy reader in the end. wouldn't it. well next is um............ |
| WWEFANFORLIFE | 05/06/2007 - 05:38 pm | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
i like the end to this story him showing the real john thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: well what else could he do. |
| bcktolife | 05/06/2007 - 05:36 pm | 14: CHAPTER 13 – AN IDEAL WOMAN | Anonymous |
This was GREAT, FANTASTIC even! Loved every minute of it!
Author's Response: thanks |
| Pris | 05/05/2007 - 08:51 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
Finally we get to John! LOL!!
Author's Response: well its always been john. |
| vittel | 05/03/2007 - 02:05 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
the only record he have to set straight is when she puts her foot up his butt and smash the record. and elise just makes me want to punch in her snotty face. i hate people who take people for a joke and use them as they please. so afte this do we get some hot love making and then evangeline will kick his butt out for good? i hope not.
Author's Response: lol i see terri and you have been talking . well we will see. just tune in saturday and i'll let you know. |
| terri | 05/03/2007 - 02:03 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
thats right evangeline, don't let her suck you in with that all to innocent smile. cuff in her face. and cuff thorpe/john to. bastard. how could he show up now at your door wanting to talk. okay i think you should listen to him.
Author's Response: lol girl you are crazy. make up your mind. i know i told you otherwise but hey its all fun giving you a clue here and there knowing you won't figure it out in time. |
| BCG | 05/02/2007 - 04:09 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
Okay so i'll agree with one thing before i go off...this was a short chapter alittle to too short and then in the next chapter it ends so like the next one WILL BE length WORTHY right?
Now i tell you i'm done. i won't be feeling bad about not leaving you a review because you still choose to ignore putting some work into my story that i love...so this will be the last review i leave you until you have heard me out loud and clear.
And i don''t want no short word wrapping chapter that you are famous for, trying to placate me. well even though i like this story i WANT MINE, but good job SB. I hope your next chapter goes will for the super soap couple.
peace out
jules
Author's Response: well the end is nearer like saturday to be precise.
yeah but i told you when i am done with this one i will focus on the other and trust i will be posting at least 2 chapters as a bonus update to catch you upto date. ch and tehy pretty long. ok.. bye................ |
| bcktolife | 05/02/2007 - 03:14 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
Van needs to kick her ass, his ass then turn around and kick her own ass for going to another country on a whim not to mention pretending to be her cousin thereby placing herself in harm's way. While we're on the subject of danger, who was the dangerous person(s) if everyone that came into contact with Van were agents? Was it London who pretended to be Luigio? Furthermore, who 'planted' the cocaine in her bags? I hate to see this one go...I love mystery and intrique sprinkled with some damn good loving.
Author's Response: why should she do that she didn't do anything wrong. i did say who were teh dangerous persons in this chapter they are mentioned read again and you'll see who they are. there are four of them . well it needs to end so the next one can end to. |
| WWEFANFORLIFE | 05/02/2007 - 01:56 pm | 13: CHAPTER 12 –THE LAST LAUGH | Anonymous |
yeah get the record straight you lying ass i hope van kick him in the nuts. thanks for the update
Author's Response: i think she just might saturday is teh last update so look out then and find out what she does. |
| vittel | 04/30/2007 - 07:39 pm | 12: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2 | Anonymous |
i would not have thought elise to be so low. van needs to disown her right away. and why is thorpe/john treating her like a criminal. he screwed her and then he pulls its the job card, my foot. van needs to cut his arse and elise like today.
Author's Response: me neither. i am thinking about it. hey the man is doing his job. well you sound lik a prude when you say he screwed her...lol we'll see read the next two chapters. |
| JEFF | 04/30/2007 - 03:40 pm | 12: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2 | Anonymous |
At first you had me confused on who the hell was who. If John was thorpe or was thorpe was thorpe.
Or if Elise would really that much of a bitch but now I agree with everyone kick that bitches ass Van.
JEFF
Author's Response: john was pretending to be thorpe. yeah el is pretty much like that. i am thinking about it. |
| BCg | 04/30/2007 - 03:18 pm | 12: CHAPTER 11 – YOU’RE THE MOLE OPERATION PT2 | Anonymous |
Oh yeah one more thing she better get a chance to kick elise ass...becuz what she did was fucked up beyond words....you made me bring it with a good old street ass kicking girl fight to my story..... so now its your turn to bring it and let her throw in a couple of good old punches to John jaw line too...just to for me chica...smiles ...Jules
Author's Response: i am thinking about it. uh huh .... |
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